Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Chapter 14 C"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
32 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
He's definitely in love with her, and is afraid to let himself tell her. It will happen though. When he thinks he's lost her, then it will hit home. Mateo is not in the picture at all with Sami. I have another chapter to read now. I'm sorry I missed last weeks chapter, I've missed a few and am not catching up again. I'm off to read todays now. Well done, Barbara. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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He's definitely in love with her, and is afraid to let himself tell her. It will happen though. When he thinks he's lost her, then it will hit home. Mateo is not in the picture at all with Sami. I have another chapter to read now. I'm sorry I missed last weeks chapter, I've missed a few and am not catching up again. I'm off to read todays now. Well done, Barbara. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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I'm sorry you had to read this when no money's attached, but I appreciate it. Thank you.
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Totally my fault, Barbara. I wouldn't have missed it, though. I've been doing a lot of catching up today. xxx
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I only owed you one but, I couldn't quit! I wish I had a six. The story get better and more involved. I wish sometimes I could write big stories like you, but it is not in me I guess. Great work. Karen
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I only owed you one but, I couldn't quit! I wish I had a six. The story get better and more involved. I wish sometimes I could write big stories like you, but it is not in me I guess. Great work. Karen
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I know if you really wanted to you could write a novel. I have faith in you. Thank you for this kind review.
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I don't seem to feel the pull. Writing that 9,000 word novella made me crazy. Nope, I could do piece novels, like a- z animal stories, The Common sense for seniors stories are good, and maybe a shortie poem book. But a straight novel is not for me. But thank you for the nice words. Karen
Comment from tfawcus
I'm enjoying this story. Such splendid cross-currents weaving through the dialogue. I imagine Mateo will be putting himself in grave danger if he blows the whistle as suggested by Noah.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I'm enjoying this story. Such splendid cross-currents weaving through the dialogue. I imagine Mateo will be putting himself in grave danger if he blows the whistle as suggested by Noah.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Seems that this book has got some legs being #2 for July. I can see why. It is very interesting and you are doing a fantastic job not only building the relationship, but the case line story along with it. very well-done indeed!
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Seems that this book has got some legs being #2 for July. I can see why. It is very interesting and you are doing a fantastic job not only building the relationship, but the case line story along with it. very well-done indeed!
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your kind review and support. I think it needs Greg to help it along. LOL
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It is doing great! I'm lucky to get five reviewers. for mine. As one lady advised me, "You need to come back in twenty years." Oh my, my, my.
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LOL I have no clue what she means by that. It doesn't make any sense.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Mateo may be finding out not every woman can be purchased with fancy diamond rings and material wealth. Still not sure who's side he is really on, Noah's or Chen's?
"escorts services" should be escort services.
Noah and Sami still trying to sort their feelings for each other out.
Sometimes, rules have to be broken.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Mateo may be finding out not every woman can be purchased with fancy diamond rings and material wealth. Still not sure who's side he is really on, Noah's or Chen's?
"escorts services" should be escort services.
Noah and Sami still trying to sort their feelings for each other out.
Sometimes, rules have to be broken.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Noah is beginning to realize some rules need to be broken. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Daylily
I like this very romantic chapter. Tenderness is an important thing in a romantic relationship and you have expressed it beautifully here. I also enjoyed the Skeeter Davis recording! :-)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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I like this very romantic chapter. Tenderness is an important thing in a romantic relationship and you have expressed it beautifully here. I also enjoyed the Skeeter Davis recording! :-)
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from gansach
Though I love to read, I don't usually read the stories/chapters section as I'm more of a poet and they are so time consuming. My time is already consumed with writing and reviewing the poetry as well as having a life elsewhere-LOL. But I've recently completed a couple short pieces of writing, so was scrolling through and stopped to read your entry. I enjoyed it. Your characters are interesting, your story well written and inviting further reading. Best wishes with your writing!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Though I love to read, I don't usually read the stories/chapters section as I'm more of a poet and they are so time consuming. My time is already consumed with writing and reviewing the poetry as well as having a life elsewhere-LOL. But I've recently completed a couple short pieces of writing, so was scrolling through and stopped to read your entry. I enjoyed it. Your characters are interesting, your story well written and inviting further reading. Best wishes with your writing!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
How sweet, Barbara. Sami turns down Mateo's proposal, again, and she has to make a choice on whether to stay there at his estate where she will be protected or to go back with Noah to the place she's been staying.
She goes, but is hurt because she feels Noah doesn't really share her feelings. In the end, he snuggles with her in bed to give her comfort, all above board, of course.
Great job.
Rhonda
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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How sweet, Barbara. Sami turns down Mateo's proposal, again, and she has to make a choice on whether to stay there at his estate where she will be protected or to go back with Noah to the place she's been staying.
She goes, but is hurt because she feels Noah doesn't really share her feelings. In the end, he snuggles with her in bed to give her comfort, all above board, of course.
Great job.
Rhonda
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jacob1395
It sounds as though the hunt for the trafficked girls is really beginning to heat up and I really do hope they manage to rescue them. Another excellent chapter in your story Barbara, I really enjoyed reading it, I'm looking forward to the next post.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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It sounds as though the hunt for the trafficked girls is really beginning to heat up and I really do hope they manage to rescue them. Another excellent chapter in your story Barbara, I really enjoyed reading it, I'm looking forward to the next post.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
That was a sweetly romantic scene -the one where Noah holds Sami within the framework of law! Thank you for that . Sami has clearly understood Mateo .She is a wise one..
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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That was a sweetly romantic scene -the one where Noah holds Sami within the framework of law! Thank you for that . Sami has clearly understood Mateo .She is a wise one..
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
