General Poetry posted March 31, 2025


Free verse poem about female black phoebe

Black Phoebe Among the Pigeons

by CrystieCookie999

After a spring rainstorm strikes and strafes

early pink crocuses and tulip shoots,

the black phoebe ventures out

during the last raindrops.

Here the phoebe sits, content.

Short, petite, and sweet, 

she flicks her tail to keep her balance when

gray pigeons land to perch

on the same high utility wire.

The bird is like a slim, single half-sheet note, written

by a pretty, pert girl who would rather be dancing,

This phoebe misses the warm winter

she spent in Mexico

but is poised—like hope—among

the portly pigeon matrons.

That hope may find a harbor when the rain

collects in puddling pools,

and mosquitoes soon join in,

providing food for any hungry bird.

Those pigeons seem quite idle

but pre-occupied, genteel,

all huddled in a patient train of thought.

The phoebe, gypsy Carmen of the lot, chirps

occasionally, flirtatiously to see if any likely mate

may come into view. It may not happen today,

but she would prefer the male to call to her

anyway, on a blossom-studded morning

without pigeon chaperones around her.

She has faith he will show up,

and even the pigeons coo encouragement.




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