Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

This is an emotional Romance poem for the Valentine's contest, hopefully it's not autobiographical. Nicely done Trisha
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020

Glad you enjoyed my words, thank you
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written valentine's poem in twenty syllables you reveal the love connection and the lost of a liver that leaves you alone and without appeal for the world.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020

Thanks for your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Badger_29

Excellent

Nicely penned, I especially enjoyed the Rhythm and flow of it. It fit the format well, and roll off the tongue like a mantra. It is the other side of the coin~
Blessings,
BB

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020

BB
Thanks for your kind words
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Oh wow you used such few words but put a lot of love lost into it. Losing love in whatever way is bad enough, but then it absolutely does take the good things with it. Nicely done

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020

Thanks for your kind words
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

'A Love Lost"
Is a Valentine's Day Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this!
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020

Good review! Thanks for your kind words
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante

Excellent

This is a very sad poem of love lost. It's very hard to recover from a broken relationship, and a person can feel completely shattered. This break has such finality, that it's hard to know if the poet's loved one died, or simply left him or her. The quotation in the image reinforces this finality.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020

Thanks for your kind words
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

Awe, bless your heart. If it was a companion, when two become one flesh, then, when that one is gone, a part of you is as well. I like this and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020

Thanks for your kind words, Jeffrey
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Valentine Poem contest.
This short verse tells of weeping over a lost love.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020

Thanks, Sharon, i appreciate your kind review
hugs,
Trisha

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

What a sad, heartwrenching poem. It's very well-written. One I'm sure many can relate to. Your great word choice lets the reader feel your pain, heartache for your lost love. The poem above your compliments your poem nicely. Good luck with your contest.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020

Thanks for your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha