Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Lovesick"My Collection of Love Poetry
10 total reviews
Comment from Badger_29
Absolutely loved it it fit the phone roll. And just when you think you know what it's going to say you have an ironic Twist of us chant meaning involving design kind mind and time in such a clever way is that adorned 6/3 and no doubt I see no room for improvement it's perfect love the style I'm going to try it myself.
Sincerely,
Brother Badger
Darren
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Absolutely loved it it fit the phone roll. And just when you think you know what it's going to say you have an ironic Twist of us chant meaning involving design kind mind and time in such a clever way is that adorned 6/3 and no doubt I see no room for improvement it's perfect love the style I'm going to try it myself.
Sincerely,
Brother Badger
Darren
Comment Written 16-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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I was uplifted by your review.I do these club style-challenges to keep my grey matter exercised! FS is a great place for combining creative writing with purging. I am happy that you enjoyed it and I?ll look forward to reading your choice of subject.
Hugs, Trisha.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You did well with this triquint form Trish, with your refrain lines working in well in preceding verses to tell the story of a broken heart.
Well done,
cheers.
valda
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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You did well with this triquint form Trish, with your refrain lines working in well in preceding verses to tell the story of a broken heart.
Well done,
cheers.
valda
Comment Written 15-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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At my age, it should not be personal but........!!!!. The emotions are food for thought. Thanks for your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Trisha,
Thank you for sharing this well-shaped poem about heartache. It seems that if we want to get love, we have to take the risk. It isn't always a pleasant experience, and you've described the heartache well,
~MP~
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Hi, Trisha,
Thank you for sharing this well-shaped poem about heartache. It seems that if we want to get love, we have to take the risk. It isn't always a pleasant experience, and you've described the heartache well,
~MP~
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thanks very much for your omplimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks all lovesick feelings are not same as some lovesick feeling are not so refined as they come randomly mis-timed; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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This speaks all lovesick feelings are not same as some lovesick feeling are not so refined as they come randomly mis-timed; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thanks very much for your omplimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Michele Harber
Been there, done that, in a very similar situation, where I loved someone who loved someone else (to whom I'd introduced him in the first place!!!). At least I never had to describe the situation following stringent line and syllable count and rhyme and refrain patterns, but you managed to do that beautifully and emotionally, and with well-done rhymes.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Been there, done that, in a very similar situation, where I loved someone who loved someone else (to whom I'd introduced him in the first place!!!). At least I never had to describe the situation following stringent line and syllable count and rhyme and refrain patterns, but you managed to do that beautifully and emotionally, and with well-done rhymes.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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I feel for your pain, You?d think I was younger, but I went through the same emotional turmoil in my sixties! Thanks very much for your complimentary review, but I think you underestimate your ability. Give that style a try
Hugs, Trisha
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You're very welcome for the review - and thanks for your faith in my writing ability!
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Have faith in YOURself!
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Thank you. I actually do, but certain types of poetry do intimidate me.
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Me too, LOL!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bucketlist
You certanley know how to write Triquint format with out any problems. Smiles to your refrain -
Your love was designed
heart resigned
Time
Gert
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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Hello Bucketlist
You certanley know how to write Triquint format with out any problems. Smiles to your refrain -
Your love was designed
heart resigned
Time
Gert
Comment Written 10-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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Wow! That was the first time I?d ever heard of the style, let alone write a poem. Thanks for your complimentary review.
Hugs, Trisha
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You are welcome Trisha Gert
Comment from damommy
You did a great job with this triquint. All requirements met, and it tells a story. The picture certainly goes with the theme of the poem. It's kinda fun to write one of these, isn't it?
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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You did a great job with this triquint. All requirements met, and it tells a story. The picture certainly goes with the theme of the poem. It's kinda fun to write one of these, isn't it?
Comment Written 10-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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Hi, yes it?s great fun for me! These style challenges are great for brain health,. Thanks for your positive review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever form and I enjoyed your rendition of lovesick feelings and emotions here Trisha, this ended in a sad absence between lovers, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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A clever form and I enjoyed your rendition of lovesick feelings and emotions here Trisha, this ended in a sad absence between lovers, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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I was good! I didn?t steal her man LOL Thanks, Dolly for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Triquain about being in love with someone that is already taken by someone else, you know the feelings are real but you are not allowed to show it or say it to anyone.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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A very well-written Triquain about being in love with someone that is already taken by someone else, you know the feelings are real but you are not allowed to show it or say it to anyone.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thanks very much for your complimentary review, Sandra. Yes, it?s difficult,but I wouldn?t want to be a home wrecker. Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, another melodic poem...I like the rhythmic feel of this one and the repetition really soothes the mind as you read through it -- great job and thanx for exposing the novices out here to new 'stuff' to enjoy!! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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Oh, another melodic poem...I like the rhythmic feel of this one and the repetition really soothes the mind as you read through it -- great job and thanx for exposing the novices out here to new 'stuff' to enjoy!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 10-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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You?re welcome! Its fun for me to do these challenges . Keeps the old grey matter well folded!
Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
