Comment from Miss Sherry

Excellent

Just this side of racy...and you are quite right. Wham bam is just not going to do it. Nothing is more erotic than sweet talk. Oh, that more men would learn that. Lovely picture that almost makes the reader swoon. I enjoyed this tremendously.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019

Thank you so much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha

reply by Miss Sherry on 08-Jan-2019

My joy!!

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

the whole poem looks like a giant candybar, Trisha. that's great. a little spicy, the way love is supposed to be. a good one for the contest.................meeshu

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019

Hi meeshu! It?s a pleasant surprise to have your review. I appreciate your kind words. What a delicious visual description you
added too
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

In my opinion, a convincing write in its descriptive expression of perfect seduction - well constructed and easy in its smooth rhyme - a striking presentation in verse and imagery, and no, you are not alone - compliant with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019

Thank you very much for a glowing review, Eve. I?m glad you enjoyed my penning.
Hugs, Trisha

reply by evesayshi on 07-Jan-2019

You are very welcome, Trisha - a beautiful write...Eve

Comment from Badger_29

Excellent

This can be a difficult subject, however you approached it with nice meter Ryan and Cadence you set the scene for old-fashioned Romance. Which yes, as an adult I appreciate the warm caress candlelight dinner and romance more than just the dirty active sex itself. The ladder is enjoyable but the former is of utmost importance. I've see a theme going here and if you were in the vicinity, I would ask if you would like to go for coffee or something just for starters.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

If I was much younger, and not in a relationship......thanks for your compliment. This kind of writing is more of a purge over-what-may-have-been if I hadn?t made the choices I did, Your review was so thoughtful and forthright,I was touched. Thanks my FS friend,

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

And, goodness knows, they certainly take the 'Os' to mean success...!! :) LOL! A wonderful offering for the contest...to put the love back in lovemaking! :) :) thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thanks so much for your supportive review
Hugs,Trisha

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written romantic love poem the success of a great romantic evening depends on the way we are treated before the end of the evening will determine the sweatness of the prize.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thanks so much for your supportive review
Hugs,Trisha

Comment from zlp22

Excellent

A great love poem and picture. Good word flow makes it a fast and interesting read. Good luck in the contest. I love the last line. The color makes the words stand out.p

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thanks so much for your supportive review
Hugs,Trisha

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Well, I have little use for an Eros type of love, Bucketlist.
Or to be more specific, the kind of love one man shows to just one very special lady.
To be honest I love 'em all and as frequently as possible.
Discretionary caution observed, of course.
~Dean

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

You may find a raunchier version somewhere soon. I can?t enter it in contest because I saw it after two posting today. Thanks for reviewing.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I'm not sure if you should have put a sexually explicit tag on this or not. I had someone flip out when I had a line about getting in someones pants. OtherwisIt has everything I look for in a poem. It rhymes, it makes sense, and it evoked emotions within me. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Earl, there?s always one! Thanks so much for your supportive review
Hugs,Trisha

Comment from Carolyn Reaves

Excellent

I love the illustration you have selected. Your rhyming is very well done. Good luck in the contest. Your writing shows lots of emotion. It sounds like you are in love.

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 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

LOL no, its just the opposite! I wrote my wishes & dreams. Thank you so much for your kind review
Hugs, Tricia

reply by Carolyn Reaves on 28-Nov-2018

Well, you should be. You sound like you would be a great catch for someone.

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thanks for the compliment!