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Scene at a Cast Meeting

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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That cell sounds disgusting

I like your sense of humor. The dialog is engaging and intriguing.

I'm Spanish, the word for ( go ) is

CED is not Latin for "go". The right word is VOY (yo voy, tu vas, El va, nosotros vamos, vosotros vais, hellos van

Well done

Gypsy

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 06-Apr-2025
    I entered Google with the word CED and searched for awork with. Go appeared from supposedly the Latin.
reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 07-Apr-2025
    Oh, Latin and Spanish are different though they share roots.

    The word for go in latin is 'eo'

    Anyway... it's not a big deal
reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 07-Apr-2025
    Oh.... I know what happened. The word go in latin is "cede"

    "to go," "to yield," or "to surrender".
Comment from jim vecchio
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I have no idea where you're headed with this thing, but I wish you the very best. You are due much credit for your perseverance. I did four chapters of a novel and had to take a long hiatus. Please stick to it nd don't give up,

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
    Why should you know something I don't know about this story. : )
Comment from nomi338
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Well Lisa wanted to have a woman be involved. Looks like she got her wish, too bad it had to be as a victim, but then that is often the case in this crazy society we live in. The victimization of women is an old trope that never seems to end or change.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
    In world that’s 50/50 male to female, someone has to go.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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With names like GED, OED and CED, it's really hard to tell them apart. The funniest part was the "Ced Cadaver is a woman." I like "Ced" better than "CED."

Well done.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
    It is a headache.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I really enjoyed your story! The back and forth between the characters had me smiling. Your dialogue makes it feel like I'm right there with them. Your creative approach to the alphabet and the personalities of the characters had me so interested. I'm excited to see where this story goes next! Keep it up!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
    Thank you, Michae
Comment from lyenochka
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How is Ced to go? Shouldn't be like ire like the Spanish va?
I guess ced could be related to the root "cede" as to concede, recede.
Enjoyed all your alphabetic reasons for your names! And yes, Lisa is right - women can be an emotional dynamo. But I'm glad you don't have an IED character...

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    I was trying to find something meaningful for CED. The Latin relationship was on one site and filled my need.