A Love not meant to be
Better to have loved and lost than not to have loved at all3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao !
When we love , we want to believe that it will be forever.
Life is full of bumps and curves and despite both lovers are committed , sadly sometimes it's still not enough .
It's still better to have loved than never.. there are the memories to keep us warm in Winter.
These are the lines I love :
my heart had lost its key
will always be in my chest of treasure
PS: many members have eye issues , the black print is hard to read ..white would be better
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Ciao !
When we love , we want to believe that it will be forever.
Life is full of bumps and curves and despite both lovers are committed , sadly sometimes it's still not enough .
It's still better to have loved than never.. there are the memories to keep us warm in Winter.
These are the lines I love :
my heart had lost its key
will always be in my chest of treasure
PS: many members have eye issues , the black print is hard to read ..white would be better
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Thanks so much for the fantastic review and your suggestion about the print. Will surely keep this in mind next time
Comment from Angel Debbie
What a write it sounds like a love affair I once had many moons ago. How you explained it was just how it all happened too. Nice write Good luck with the contest. Have a great weekend
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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What a write it sounds like a love affair I once had many moons ago. How you explained it was just how it all happened too. Nice write Good luck with the contest. Have a great weekend
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much for this awesome review.
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Your Welcome. Thanks for nominating too.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem has such deep emotion. I really felt the heartache in your words. The idea of love meant for another time and world is so touching.
Your words flow beautifully! And the emotions shine through in every line. This is so heartfelt!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Your poem has such deep emotion. I really felt the heartache in your words. The idea of love meant for another time and world is so touching.
Your words flow beautifully! And the emotions shine through in every line. This is so heartfelt!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words, Means so much!
