Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so thoughtful. I really liked how you showed the way mistakes can weigh on us but also teach us. The message of forgiveness
is comforting. The flow of your lines made it easy to follow. This is a wonderful poem with a important message!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
Comment from
kahpot
Very well said, yes, I think everyone has a slip of the tongue every now and then, and I am sure we will be forgiven for a little slip, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
Many thanks Kahpot I like your interptretation of the verse.