Comment from Michael John Gould

Exceptional

Damn this was powerful I am still feeling the heart-beak the flow was great and for me it just keep climbing and climbing till complete rejection good job and good luck GodBless

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025

Thanks for the great review and the six stars.

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

I like the repeating lines that reinforce the idea of love gone wrong. It's sad and convincing, your words speak a unhappy truth...that usually someone ends up with a broken heart, while the other just goes on thier way. Best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025

Thanks for your kind comments and the 5 stars.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent poem for the challenge. It tells a story to which many will relate. Good colorful descriptions. This flows well and there are a lot of truths. t's painful to watch someone pine over a person who isn't worth their time, You were able to express all of those emotions. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2025

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Some relationships fail and we never seen it coming or understand where we went wrong but we have to accept it and move on as dwelling on old flames is futile, a poignant write full of emotions, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2025