Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your poem hits hard with just a few words. The lack of words I think helps make it so powerful. I can feel the disappointment and sadness. I also appreciate the simple honesty in how you say it. Growing older and seeing someone change in a way you didn't expect is sad. Wonderful job writing this.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
Comment from
kahpot
Alcoholism is a terrible addiction, and unfortunately the young find it very hard to kick as they get older, and it is disturbing for all family and friends, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025