You Learn Something New Everyday
This was a learning experience for me6 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is an interesting poem and I a not sure what the point of it was. Maybe I don't know what a Soliloquy poem is supposed to be.
You have a typo: (quite) should be (quiet)
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
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This is an interesting poem and I a not sure what the point of it was. Maybe I don't know what a Soliloquy poem is supposed to be.
You have a typo: (quite) should be (quiet)
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
Comment from lyenochka
This is sweet. I wonder how old the narrator is. She seems to know how to check spelling and definitions on Google and that helps a lot. The balcony makes me think of Romeo and Juliet and Juliet would say, a balcony by any other name, would be just as sturdy! Fun soliloquy. Best wishes in the contest!
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This is sweet. I wonder how old the narrator is. She seems to know how to check spelling and definitions on Google and that helps a lot. The balcony makes me think of Romeo and Juliet and Juliet would say, a balcony by any other name, would be just as sturdy! Fun soliloquy. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
Comment from royowen
Well done, I've made a few suggestions to make the grammar have the syntax a little better, well done though, blessings Roy
Typo : I see (on) from my bannister. 2 where('s) mommy, she(('s) sleeping Connoisseur means a person of good taste in ice cream or other delicacies, . Wordsmith might be better.
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Well done, I've made a few suggestions to make the grammar have the syntax a little better, well done though, blessings Roy
Typo : I see (on) from my bannister. 2 where('s) mommy, she(('s) sleeping Connoisseur means a person of good taste in ice cream or other delicacies, . Wordsmith might be better.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story made me smile! I thought the way you wrote it as internal dialogue worked so well. I loved how you showed the excitement of learning something new - I could feel the surprise! That ending was just perfect. Keep writing - this was great!
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Your story made me smile! I thought the way you wrote it as internal dialogue worked so well. I loved how you showed the excitement of learning something new - I could feel the surprise! That ending was just perfect. Keep writing - this was great!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a thought provoking and interesting story. It is himorous, like a comedians observational train of thought. I think it's tne best humor and these words about learning one thing after another are clever.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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This is a thought provoking and interesting story. It is himorous, like a comedians observational train of thought. I think it's tne best humor and these words about learning one thing after another are clever.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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Ty :)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The balcony often has a banister to stop you falling off the edge, so both words are appropriate. This child is learning and naming the stars is good for the memory, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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The balcony often has a banister to stop you falling off the edge, so both words are appropriate. This child is learning and naming the stars is good for the memory, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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Ty :)
