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Keep calm...Who Me?2 total reviews
Comment from Wright32
Nice syllable poem, short and sweet and straight to the point. I will always choose life over anything, so that's very creative in such short words.Good job.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Nice syllable poem, short and sweet and straight to the point. I will always choose life over anything, so that's very creative in such short words.Good job.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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THank you it needed altyeration It had no rhyme
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I'm giving you a five for effort as you hopefully change this. You need every line to rhyme.
Nothing rhynes in your poem. You need to pick one word and then the next two lines rhyme with it.
Choose
To put on dancing shoes
Loose
This is what you might agree with the same message and you can use my example if you like.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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I'm giving you a five for effort as you hopefully change this. You need every line to rhyme.
Nothing rhynes in your poem. You need to pick one word and then the next two lines rhyme with it.
Choose
To put on dancing shoes
Loose
This is what you might agree with the same message and you can use my example if you like.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 06-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Alex. Tact is always welcome. I have my head spinning today (I'm trying publishing, for size. Sh!
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I publish but sort of on break. After the contest we can discuss if you like.
Take it in stride. :)
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No worries. Thank you Alex. The Publisher chosen is in LA. My brother encouraged me to do something, seconded by my darling husband. It keeps me out of mischief. Have a good weekend.
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That's wonderful. My husband supports my work too. I get it! Much success with that!!
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Ta muchly
