Comment from Rick Gardner

Exceptional

A beautiful feeling of joy, a joy of seeing life with a joy of something as simple of a pool of water, slash, swim, tumble. Try sometime to swim in a stream of mountain water. the freezing water says hello, find a rock to sun in to warm up. Love these words, Thank you for them.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

hi Rick thank you for your comments and six stars! Dove

reply by Rick Gardner on 14-Mar-2025

Very welcome, can't what for more fun.

Comment from JD Moala

Good

I thought it was a bit juvenile, but it was fun too. I like how you repeat the splash splash
. Makes a swim sound fun.i also didn't know you could add pictures to poems so I will check that out. Thanks for.thay

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2025

Thank you

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem shares a wonderful picture of the joy of swimming! I love how you describe the water - "splish-splash" and "diamonds on rivulets flashing". The upcoming fall at the end wraps it up beautifully. I think that shows how time moves. What an enjoyable read. Keep it up!

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2025

hi Michael thank you