Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Wow, your story pulls me in right away! That is an intense and unsettling voice! The way you dive into the character's mind makes everything feel so real - like I'm right there experiencing his reality. That ending is so charged with tension! It left me holding my breath wondering what choice he'll make. Fantastic writing!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
Comment from
Julie G1
This tale represents a jaundiced and imaginative version of humanity and the limitations of society. On the flip side, the writer demonstrates an imaginative and unique ability for building the imagery to lure the reader to the potential of the subsequent interactions.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025