Friend Or Frenemy
A conversation in the mind5 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a match that is never going to work and sometimes our compatibility with someone has to be admitted. We can then move on and find someone who is on the same wave length as us. A poignant pose, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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This sounds like a match that is never going to work and sometimes our compatibility with someone has to be admitted. We can then move on and find someone who is on the same wave length as us. A poignant pose, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 04-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Thanks Dolly, the frenemy is really a female. I thought the twist about love added weight. The real frenemy does not like my being a successful writer. Your encouragement is a b;essing.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem pulled me right into the emotions! The back and forth with the inner voice felt so real. It felt like a tug of war between heart and mind. I love the honesty and humor! The ending was the perfect gut punch. So well done! So creative!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Your poem pulled me right into the emotions! The back and forth with the inner voice felt so real. It felt like a tug of war between heart and mind. I love the honesty and humor! The ending was the perfect gut punch. So well done! So creative!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Thanks, Michael. I am glad that the wee story came across that people can relate to Your encouragement is a great blessing to me
Comment from lancellot
Very nice. It clearly resembles a mind/person in a state deep emotional and logical confusion.
notes:
I nodded remembering, then thought 'What DO I hate about him?' then smiled
-I nodded remembering, then thought, 'What DO I hate about him?' then smiled.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Very nice. It clearly resembles a mind/person in a state deep emotional and logical confusion.
notes:
I nodded remembering, then thought 'What DO I hate about him?' then smiled
-I nodded remembering, then thought, 'What DO I hate about him?' then smiled.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Yes, good point. Thank you, the line is fixed.
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Yes, good point. Thank you, the line is fixed.
Comment from Arabellesmom
Hi there. I must say great job!! Excellent writing! You are a fantastic writer !! I loved reading through the words you choose to write to describe with. Awesome job !!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Hi there. I must say great job!! Excellent writing! You are a fantastic writer !! I loved reading through the words you choose to write to describe with. Awesome job !!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Oh, wow! Thank you for your enthusiastic review and encouragement. I am delighted you enjoyed it and the comments made my day.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, while some people do have trouble expressing their feelings, others do have problems admitting their weaknesses, a sick man is a sad man, a wonderful read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Excellent, while some people do have trouble expressing their feelings, others do have problems admitting their weaknesses, a sick man is a sad man, a wonderful read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Thanks Kahpot. Than the Lord for imagination too
