Willing Hearts
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Comment from Jacob1395
I really liked the banter between Sami and Noah in this piece. It really brought their character's to life in your writing, Barbara, and I thought you did an excellent job with this. Another well written chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I really liked the banter between Sami and Noah in this piece. It really brought their character's to life in your writing, Barbara, and I thought you did an excellent job with this. Another well written chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This story is really good. It kept me engaged to the end. The dialogue flows nicely and it's easy to keep track of all the players. I look forward to reading the whole novel. Great job. Keep them coming.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This story is really good. It kept me engaged to the end. The dialogue flows nicely and it's easy to keep track of all the players. I look forward to reading the whole novel. Great job. Keep them coming.
Cecilia
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm glad they had that chat; it needed saying and now all is good... for now! I loved it that Jose didn't barf on Boss. (I'd never heard that word before, so I had to check it out.) Now, what the heck has happened to Galvin? I think there is something suspicious going on with him. Well done, Barbara. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I'm glad they had that chat; it needed saying and now all is good... for now! I loved it that Jose didn't barf on Boss. (I'd never heard that word before, so I had to check it out.) Now, what the heck has happened to Galvin? I think there is something suspicious going on with him. Well done, Barbara. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Galvin isn't a good person. Thank you for the kind review
Comment from Sanku
Smooth continuation of the incidents. Some definite movements are on the cards. The solution will come soon and Sami can relax. They are very cute and now having overcome any apprehensions , open up to each other...
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Smooth continuation of the incidents. Some definite movements are on the cards. The solution will come soon and Sami can relax. They are very cute and now having overcome any apprehensions , open up to each other...
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is one of your best chapters, Barb. It is one that is a relief from the many chapters that contain conflict. Also, it is well written. Looking forward to a happy ending.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This is one of your best chapters, Barb. It is one that is a relief from the many chapters that contain conflict. Also, it is well written. Looking forward to a happy ending.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from BethShelby
This is an excellent chapter as they all are. I think I Noah and Sami are expressing their love for each other more openly and now it does seem they need as much tome after this, ends to see where things might be going as it once did. You are still telling us how much time has passed and it has still been less than a month. I used to believe you needed a least a year to know if you were really in love. It just seems like a lot of time has when actually it hasn't. It took me a year and a half to be sure but we were only together on weekends.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This is an excellent chapter as they all are. I think I Noah and Sami are expressing their love for each other more openly and now it does seem they need as much tome after this, ends to see where things might be going as it once did. You are still telling us how much time has passed and it has still been less than a month. I used to believe you needed a least a year to know if you were really in love. It just seems like a lot of time has when actually it hasn't. It took me a year and a half to be sure but we were only together on weekends.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Noah and Sami aren't interesting in time. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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lOL!
Comment from Begin Again
I loved the bits of humor in this chapter, Barbara. I guess it makes the characters seem more accurate, and not all tension. Sami and Noah seem to understand each other now, and they don't always doubt each other. Good job! Thanks for sharing.
smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I loved the bits of humor in this chapter, Barbara. I guess it makes the characters seem more accurate, and not all tension. Sami and Noah seem to understand each other now, and they don't always doubt each other. Good job! Thanks for sharing.
smiles, Carol
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.