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GWHARGIS: "Coffee With Iris" is now available on Amazon. This was probably one of my all time favorite stories to write. There is no real bad guy. Just bad situations. This story shows how all it takes sometimes is to have a friend. If you didn't read it on Fanstory, I would love it if you would get a copy and read it. Then, after you're finished, share it with a friend. |
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Can't wait to read it and leave you a review! Congratulaions! - | ||
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GWHARGIS: The weather is cooling, the sun is setting earlier each evening. Does anyone feel like the seasons affect their writing. Something is going on with me. I'm not sure what. Just wondering if it's a seasonal thing or if someone can let me know if it happens to them. |
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cool weather...🙂 long nights...😀 falling back to normal time...😁 love late autumn and winter!! 🤗🍁🍂🌧️🌦️ summer sucks.🤮 - | ||
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GWHARGIS: Be yourself. Everybody else is taken. |
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Smiles all around! diane - | ||
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😊🐈⬛🌹 - | ||
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Sal XOs - | ||
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I'm thrilled for you! - | ||
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I'm so glad that you won this. Paul - | ||
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FanStory wrote to GWHARGIS: Important Judging was posted today. It is a Milestone Post. Post number 750!
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GWHARGIS: I did it. Miranda is now on Amazon. It's listed as Miranda Chronicles. I am beyond excited. What started as a loose character study, turned into a hero to me. She took care of a narcissist in a way that I never could. But she did help me heal. Thank you to all who critiqued, helped with grammar, encouraged, laughed, bugged me to keep writing, answer questions and just embraced Miranda. It would make me happy if you bought a copy and left a review. Or told a friend about my book. |
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Wonderful news! diane - | ||
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GWHARGIS: How many of you out there find yourself checking your status more frequently than not. When I joined this time, I made a deal with myself not to get caught up with ratings. Last few weeks I've been slipping. |
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GWHARGIS: I have always heard it us best to write what you know. I have my thoughts on what this means, but I'd like to know what others think this means. |
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GWHARGIS: Question. How many prose writers on here work on several stories at a time. I have two books I'm working on and I've never had that happen before. Does anyone else work on dual projects? |
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GWHARGIS: Do you feel that sometimes writing becomes an addiction. I always say I can quit anytime I want, but inevitably I pick up that pen just one more time. |
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GWHARGIS: Thoughts on this statement: You need strong characters to carry a weak storyline, but no storyline is strong enough to carry weak characters. |
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GWHARGIS: Give yourself a compliment every day. Repeat it daily until you really mean what you say. Then add another compliment. Repeat until you truly feel the things you are saying. Be your own best friend. If you start treating yourself as you would treat your own best friend, you will like yourself a lot more. I'll start. I have a great personality. I can be funny, sarcastic, empathetic or coy. My emotional range is vast. Now, it's your turn. Put down one thing you like about yourself. |
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And Gretchen, I agree that you have a wonderful personality. I - | ||
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GWHARGIS: Life happens whether we are ready or not. Sometimes you can brace yourself. Sometimes it knocks you over. But one thing is for sure. This group here on Fanstory looks out for its own. I've seen APBs out on members who suddenly go MIA. I've seen prayer chains started. It's amazing. We all have one loosely connected goal ... to tell stories, either through poetry or prose. It is my sincere hope that everyone in this writers' community has a wonderful, safe and happy holiday season. |
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GWHARGIS: Hope everyone had a great Thanksgiving. Now, I want to read some Christmas poems, stories, or personal Christmas memories. Authors start posting. |
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GWHARGIS: To all the writers who take the time to read my work, critique, and just enjoy my writing. I want to thank you all. You have no idea how much your help on grammatical errors, spacing and just your thoughts on it, really mean to me. If you keep reading and giving feedback, I'll keep writing. |
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GWHARGIS: We are the sum of our experiences. But a good writer embellishes some. |
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GWHARGIS: Happy Halloween, ya'll. |
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GWHARGIS: Where has the summer gone? Time to put it to rest. Welcome autumn! |
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GWHARGIS: Writing is like heroin. I tried to stop to concentrate on my art. I found myself painting words on the canvas. I am back. I will review at least one day a week. |
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Welcome back! - | ||
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GWHARGIS: What's wrong with the world when the tolerant are as intolerant as the ones they deem intolerant. Follow me? |
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GWHARGIS: Sometimes my muse just sits quietly beside me and stares at the blank page with me. She complains that I don't pay her enough to work and that I buy store brand ice cream instead of name brand. Anyone else have this problem? |
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GWHARGIS: I have found that using high dollar words in my writing will never make up for not putting my soul into it. I can go through my portfolio and I know which pieces are souless. The ones I'm proud of are like my children. |
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GWHARGIS: I am slowly trying to release my poetic side to the public. Problem is, I can't follow directions at all. I guess I will stick to freestyle and 5/7/5 format. So I will thank you to critique the heck out of my work. I never take offense at legitimate and constructive reviews. |
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![]() FanStory wrote to GWHARGIS: Foxhole Memories finished first in the contest "Your favorite book line" |
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GWHARGIS: Anyone out there have or had Lymes disease. I'm being tested. I feel horrible and am hoping to hear from anyone who knows about this stuff. Thanks |
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GWHARGIS: Wondering if anyone knows how to respond to reviewers who tell you they don't think you gave enough backstory when they are randomly reviewing a mid point chapter in a novel. Pretty sure Stephen King doesn't give a character's backstory in each chapter. Don't want to get picky but why punish the author with a 3 star when you are just jumping in? |
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GWHARGIS: Happy 4th to everyone. Hope everyone has a safe and fun holiday! |
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GWHARGIS: Are there any Mystery Science Theater fans on this site? I love that show! |
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GWHARGIS: I've been working on getting my youngest son healthy. I am proud to say we are moving in the right direction. Albeit, baby steps, but at least it's in the right direction. Can I get a halaleugah? ! |
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Victoria - | ||
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GWHARGIS: Some people have an uncanny ability to be a d---he-bag. Even when you're trying to help them. Never be the person who thinks everyone is beneath them and the only purpose they serve is to be berated and abused. Remember, Mr. Arsehole, you are the reason the chef spits in your food. Treat people nicely and with respect and you just may get extra fries. |
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GWHARGIS: Today, I choose the path less taken. I choose to see every moment of life today as a gift. I choose to ignore the thorns and smell the rose. I hope you choose wisely. |
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And talking about weed, that path less taken must be full of it. Have I chosen wisely? Enjoy! :-)) - | ||
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GWHARGIS: Am I the only one who has better conversations with my fictional characters than with real people? Does that make me weird? Or rather, weirder? Just wondering. |
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Ha! Big smile if you know what I mean. Now, back to the conversation I was having with an imaginary friend of mine... - | ||
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GWHARGIS: Thoughts on clowns. Are they fun, creepy, hiding from something? I feel it's a lost art, now ruined by Hollywood. I was never scared of Red Skelton and he was a clown without makeup. Ah, is it the makeup that scares us? |
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"Throughout history, clowns have represented the side of us that is not acceptable to society. That side is formed from our most primal urges and is not always neat or pretty. Perhaps the clown both attracts and repels us because he or she holds up a mirror to our inner selves." From me... thinking on her thought... maybe we are becoming more afraid of ourselves? - | ||
I don't remember being afraid of clowns when I was a kid, but I only saw them once or twice. But a the age of 10 or 11, when I saw them, I just thought they were stupid. Two grown men getting into a tiny car, honking the horn, hitting each other over the head, certainly didn't impress me or scare me. - | ||
My brother was driving and another driver was speeding on the right of us to merge ahead of us though there was nobody behind us, it was clear to merge. I told my brother... Hey, watch out for this clown merging. When I turned my head... the guy driving was in full clown gear... big yellow gloves and red nose and all. It was a surreal, 'living in a satire', moment. - | ||
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GWHARGIS: Who do you identify with in Alice in Wonderland? I feel closest to the Rabbit. Good grief! I'm late ... for everything. |
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GWHARGIS: I hope everyone has a wonderful Easter. Enjoy the day. |
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GWHARGIS: Peace to all on this rainy spring day. May your upcoming week be wonderful. |
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GWHARGIS: Can anyone give me a cure for writers block? I have it bad. |
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If that doesn't work, I go do something else and completely take my mind off of it. A monotonous task like washing dishes or weeding. Usually, my mind will drift back to the story. Sometimes it works sometimes it doesn't. I think we can all sympathize. - | ||
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keep coming back and looking at them. You'll be surprised what might be trash today, can be reworked and made new on another day, with a different brainwave, or two. ;) Good luck! (I have a folder with nearly 200 documents in it... gibberish when I started... as I learn, they become sonnets, free verses, rispetto's... etc. ) Mwah! - | ||
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Or - have an extra SMALL glass of vino! - | ||
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GWHARGIS: Is 54 too old to develop ADHD? Having a difficult time concentrating on longer works, ie: Formerly Known as Turtle. I have decided to put my energy into flash fiction and short personal essays. Hopefully, the novel muse will show up with some Adderall and I can get back to business. |
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GWHARGIS: Santa just brought me a tablet. Starting January 1st, I will resume posting. Trying to get a turn on the home computer has been next to impossible lately. Now I have no excuses not to post. |
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GWHARGIS: After taking an extensive break from Fanstory, I feel refreshed and ready to start posting again. I really missed the wonderful writing and the friendships I have made herear. I'm sorry I left without a word, but at that point in my life I was treading water. |
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~Dean ;) - | ||
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GWHARGIS: I have another muse. One that is pulling at me to drag out my canvases and paints and forget about Alex and Ben. I am determined to finish their story. But I may take some time off the paint when they are finished. |
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GWHARGIS: Pollen, pollen everywhere. But once we wipe it away spring will have sprung. Enjoy your new season. |
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Many Republicans/Conservatives see this as the onset of a bitter winter. - | ||
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GWHARGIS: Do you ever think about clichés? I have been thinking about the one When Life gives you lemons, Make Lemonade. I have one question. Who the hell is supposed to give you the sugar to put in it? Because last time I checked, lemonade with no sugar is just plain sour. |
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GWHARGIS: Am taking a little bit of time off. Life is getting crazy lately, so with that in mind, I am going to briefly check in now and then. Don't want to land in the padded room by over extending myself. Don't think I am ignoring you, I will try to read the occasional piece but I won't be able to catch everything. Thanks for understanding. Gretchen |
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:) Hope all is well Gretchen hugs xxx - | ||
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GWHARGIS: I finally did it!!!! I self published The 'Shine Baby. It is now available on Amazon and Kindle. I am so happy and proud. Thank you to all the reviewers and friends who helped me every step of the way. |
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Big congrats are in order for your success. If you're lucky enough to publish a hundred more stories, I promise you, the excitement will be the same for each published tale. Ted - | ||
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from me, and all of the monsters in my stable, a heartfelt "CONGRATS!" to you for your published work, Gretchen! ![]() | ||
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Well done! I am honoured to have you on my "F List" Perhaps I should grab your autograph now before I am brushed aside by your burly body guards :) Lotsa love tracey :) - | ||
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It is a big achievement,and you won the prompt too with 'The dragonfly dancer'..thus a double win:-) - | ||
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GWHARGIS: I enjoy the edge. My writing most times reflects that. I also enjoy a good limerick. I like that here I can put something out there and almost immediately I get a response. To any writer, a response(good or bad) is a very good thing. |
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Thanks for using my image! Please visit my website (http://www.OffCenterImages.com) and let me know what you think. My email address is michael.adler@verizon.net. Thank you again! -- Mike - | ||
You did a phenomenial picture. I will visit your web site asap. I was knocked over when I saw how beautifully detailed the picture was. i couldn't imagine anything else to go with my poem. Thanks for letting me use it. - | ||
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