Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Chapter 15 B"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
36 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Still going strong, No clear exit yet. Several people who can change up things. this is better and better all the time. I enjoy the calm way you write. Karen :-)
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Still going strong, No clear exit yet. Several people who can change up things. this is better and better all the time. I enjoy the calm way you write. Karen :-)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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I appreciate you going back and reading. Thank you.
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:-)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That puzzle box sounds interesting, it's something my grandson would like. This is good chapter, Barbara, we learned that it's possible that Myra might be a drug addict by the time she's saved. I hope it's sooner rather than later, it will be a lot harder to ween her off. We're moving ahead now, I'm off to read the next chapter. :)) Sandra xx
I'm all over the place with the reviews, not being here last Sunday. xxx
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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That puzzle box sounds interesting, it's something my grandson would like. This is good chapter, Barbara, we learned that it's possible that Myra might be a drug addict by the time she's saved. I hope it's sooner rather than later, it will be a lot harder to ween her off. We're moving ahead now, I'm off to read the next chapter. :)) Sandra xx
I'm all over the place with the reviews, not being here last Sunday. xxx
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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The puzzle box will play a part in Sami and Noah's romance. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
I like how he changes the "not-allowed" to exclude himself. Pretty realistic in law enforcement from my experience.
Sorry, I fell way behind with some vacation issues.
I continue to enjoy this journey!
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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I like how he changes the "not-allowed" to exclude himself. Pretty realistic in law enforcement from my experience.
Sorry, I fell way behind with some vacation issues.
I continue to enjoy this journey!
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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I hope everything worked itself out. My prayers are with you. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Lisa Carter1
You're a very good storyteller I am new to the site and looking forward to being able to write a children's book someday. I'm also like to make people laugh so I'm sure that I'll have some of this on the site as well. But mostly poetry some dark some light. Very well written once again.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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You're a very good storyteller I am new to the site and looking forward to being able to write a children's book someday. I'm also like to make people laugh so I'm sure that I'll have some of this on the site as well. But mostly poetry some dark some light. Very well written once again.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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For me children's books are really hard to write because one needs to cautious of the word usage and the word count. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Barbara,
I missed this chapter. Sami seems fascinated with a puzzle box, now I'm intrigued as well. I wonder what's inside?
Mateo is off scouting around and is getting a date to boot.
Noah and Sami are still working on staying within their professional rules, but acknowledging their deepening relationship.
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Hi Barbara,
I missed this chapter. Sami seems fascinated with a puzzle box, now I'm intrigued as well. I wonder what's inside?
Mateo is off scouting around and is getting a date to boot.
Noah and Sami are still working on staying within their professional rules, but acknowledging their deepening relationship.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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The puzzle box will be important to her and Noah's relationship. Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh, how exciting!!!!
Comment from Colorado Owl
I wish I could write dialog like this! This sounds like an interesting book on a very relevant topic. Interesting characters and realistic interaction. Thank you for giving us a glimpse of your book and best wishes on its publishing success.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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I wish I could write dialog like this! This sounds like an interesting book on a very relevant topic. Interesting characters and realistic interaction. Thank you for giving us a glimpse of your book and best wishes on its publishing success.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. Please stop by again.
Comment from Jacob1395
Another excellent chapter in your book Barbara, I really enjoyed the dialogue between the characters as always and I thought it flowed really well. I'm looking forward to the next post.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Another excellent chapter in your book Barbara, I really enjoyed the dialogue between the characters as always and I thought it flowed really well. I'm looking forward to the next post.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
Hi, you got an awesome story telling, very fine to the detail. I like how you set up all your characters, and each got a very interesting point. Too bad that I have only 5 star in my drop list, your work deserved a 6 star review. Oh, yeah, congrats to your winning in "Recognized" and #6 place all time best, bravos, and way to go!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Hi, you got an awesome story telling, very fine to the detail. I like how you set up all your characters, and each got a very interesting point. Too bad that I have only 5 star in my drop list, your work deserved a 6 star review. Oh, yeah, congrats to your winning in "Recognized" and #6 place all time best, bravos, and way to go!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. Don't worry about the stars, virtual sixes are just as good.
Comment from Daylily
Another good chapter, Barbara. I only noticed one thing:
The first paragraph has sat and set.
The third paragraph has set and sat.
re: Sami set the last dish on the table and sat.
-- This might read a little more effectively by saying something like:
Sami placed the last dish on the table before taking a chair next to Noah.
I'm always eager to read the next chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Another good chapter, Barbara. I only noticed one thing:
The first paragraph has sat and set.
The third paragraph has set and sat.
re: Sami set the last dish on the table and sat.
-- This might read a little more effectively by saying something like:
Sami placed the last dish on the table before taking a chair next to Noah.
I'm always eager to read the next chapter. :-)
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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I made the correction. Thank you for the assistance. I appreciate it.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Barbara
I really like this book you're writing I like Noah, especially and then Sammy then Bob and Sarah. That's my pecking order like it or not leave it or not.
Sammy and Noah have fallen in love, but they can't show it because he's protecting her. He should not be in love with her because he's protecting her.
So far, they have no attemps on Sami's.life
Even Mateo seems like a good guy in this book even though he's a murderer before we saw him
I think they're getting close defining the ring, but findimh Myra.another story
I'll bet she has been drugged and used as a prostitute. Unfortunate for her. It often takes years if ever for trafficking victims to heal their emotional wounds
Here close his what? Something is missing
""them now, Chen might close his or move them. We can't afford him "
I enjoyed reading your
story.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Hi, Barbara
I really like this book you're writing I like Noah, especially and then Sammy then Bob and Sarah. That's my pecking order like it or not leave it or not.
Sammy and Noah have fallen in love, but they can't show it because he's protecting her. He should not be in love with her because he's protecting her.
So far, they have no attemps on Sami's.life
Even Mateo seems like a good guy in this book even though he's a murderer before we saw him
I think they're getting close defining the ring, but findimh Myra.another story
I'll bet she has been drugged and used as a prostitute. Unfortunate for her. It often takes years if ever for trafficking victims to heal their emotional wounds
Here close his what? Something is missing
""them now, Chen might close his or move them. We can't afford him "
I enjoyed reading your
story.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Mateo has never been a murder. I'm curious where you got that idea from. Thank you for the kind review. I'll check those areas out.
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Well Garth and Donetelli talked as if he was a mobster. I made too big of a leap then I guess
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I think you have your stories mixed up, Garth and Donetelli are in Begin Again's story, not mine.
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LOL
