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Comment from patcelaw
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It sounds as though you went through, some terribly nightmarish events in your life, and for that, I am very sorry that you had to ignore that. You're writing is absolutely wonderful and you need to keep writing. I myself have had to write my own past failures and the pain that went along with it, and it was painful to have to do the writing, but it was something that was very helpful to me personally. Patricia.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
    Hi Patricia, thank you so much for your kind words. I'm so sorry you had to go through painful things too.
    Hopefully we can get a positive out of it. Thank you for reading and stopping. And I appreciate you empathy and your heart felt comment. I hope you have the best day! Happy holidays too!
Comment from Navada
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I'm so terribly sorry this happened to you, Lea. I read Rachelle Allan's awesome interview with you and I would love to be reading and reviewing more of your work, but I fear struggling with the content as I'm an empath. You have my sympathy for the outrageous and terrible things that were inflicted upon you for no reason as described here. I'll see whether I can manage a chapter or two here and there just because I would like to provide you with some feedback. I'll see how I go.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
    Thank you. I appreciate your kindness and your great review and your ti'm happy to have you here and thank you for reading. I know it can be a tough thing so I doubly thank you. I hope you have the best night!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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It's no surprise you have severe depression, anxiety, PTSD you are also very strong Lea to have gotten through to the stage of sharing your story. Well done,
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
    Wow that's such a nice compliment thank you so much!! I'm glad you were here with me And others were here with me holding me up and cheering me on. Thank you it's worth so much to me Your time and your kind commealso equally precious thanks again!
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Lea,
I'm sorry I didn't get to this sooner. Some days I'm busier than others. I saw what Ric mentioned to you and I can only parrot it. For now I think it's great to expose the truth. I think in writing this, you will start to heal. I hope that once you've written it, you will be able to go on with your life and put this part in the past, never to be revisited. We can't do anything about the past, but we can certainly do something about the future.
God bless you gal. You've been through a lot.
Tom

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
    Hi Tom absolutely right thank you! Once I'm finished with all of this. I'll put it in a box and put it on the shelf. Thank you again, I appreciate your reviews as always. I hope that you are well and thanks for going good for you today!
Comment from Ric Myworld
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I wish every abused person in the world could conjure up the fortitude and stamina to stand up and fight, rather than buckle and weep. So, congratulations! But we mustn't forget that, in time, we must let the retaliation rest and move on for our own sanity and healing, impossible as it sometimes seems. Although our pent-up anger seeks justice and repentance, we have to remind ourselves that those without conscience will never be sorry. Every second of every day is lost and irretrievable time. And monsters aren't worth another moment of your life. We deserve to be happy, but it can only happen when we aren't controlled by the past. I know well, it's easier said than done. Wishing you the best today, and always! Ric

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
    You are absolutely right on many points. For sure, my writing is my way of letting go of something. I couldn't get resolution. my parents never really Had to pay in any way, but this is my way of getting out there.
    And it's the causes a little grief along the way. For some people, there's not a lot of sympathy in me for that. Thank you so much again. I appreciate you and everything you've had to say and for reading along. I am most pleased, have a great day!
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Writing is powerful. It helps you sort things out, but as you sort, you are reminded of more facts and things you had forgotten. As your story progresses, you are revealing more evidence that proves you were surrounded by evil people on all sides. Their time will come.

for it is written, "Vengeance is Mine, I will repay," says the Lord (Romans 12:19

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much. I appreciate you and your kind review. And your thoughtful comments a compassionate writer.
    With much wisdom to impart. Thank you again have a great day!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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Surviving childhood abuse and neglect is an accomplishment I will never know personally, but you did a good job explaining what went on. We sure run into a huge range of behavior and opposites from what we expect here on this mortal earth. These ambivalent feelings, love-hate, affection-disgust definitely get magnified to the extreme in abusive situations.
One suggestion in this sentence:
They should have never mistaken me for stupid.
I would add the word 'being' in front of stupid.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2023
    Thank you! Always happy to have your review. Your wisdom is always appreciated! I'll shall make that change. Thank you for understanding!
Comment from Jim Wile
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Atta girl, Lea. Let 'em have it. Expose these frauds with everything you've got. Put the fear of the wrath of God into these horrible people who did such wrong to you. Make them rue the day they ever attempted to harm you and your sisters.

Do people actually still believe your mother when she spouts that nonsense about false memory syndrome and the rest? She certainly deserves to have everyone turn against her as the truth gets out. - Jim

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2023
    Oh, yes she does, she denies the 8 boxes of social service evidence. My mother says its 80% inaccurate B*******I say but yes, I shall keep on writing indeed. Thank you so much again commenting. And glad you're here with me on this journey! have a great evening!
Comment from strandregs
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Well put together Lea
Beautifully actually for such an emotional load.
I have a dear friend who can identify with having the bad mother you describe.
Another is a brilliant social worker who fights windmills and exposes and feels sick every time she needs to meet these people.
Well done. Z.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much I appreciate your review and your kind comments. Thank you again I hope you have the best evening!
Comment from JSD
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Beyond all the horror is a writing style that is utterly compelling. Lea you are such a talent and I hope you are looking to publish at some point. 'Diary of an Abused Child' is a better title.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much, John, yes, I will attempt to have it published for sure. There will be repercussions. I'm already getting pressure from here to stop but I will not stop I will keep writing. Thank you john so much I hope you are well. Have a great night