Do You See What I See...
blessings follow me32 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is so lovely, Art Asylum, with some really lovely imagery to take us along with you. You wouldn't feel fear, not when angels are walking beside you. This is a great contest entry, my friend. Good luck! :)) Sandra xx
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That is so lovely, Art Asylum, with some really lovely imagery to take us along with you. You wouldn't feel fear, not when angels are walking beside you. This is a great contest entry, my friend. Good luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
Comment from Janetsue
This is a lovely poem about angels. I like the imagery and alliteration, as well. The picture you chose to accompany your poetry possesses an ethereal has an feeling. An excellent choice! Best wishes in the contest!
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This is a lovely poem about angels. I like the imagery and alliteration, as well. The picture you chose to accompany your poetry possesses an ethereal has an feeling. An excellent choice! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful and beautiful poem. It is well written. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
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I have enjoyed reading your wonderful and beautiful poem. It is well written. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from Gert sherwood
blessings follow me
Do You See What I See...
Artasylum Smiles to your poem for the contest
There is one line I believe you can change ---The night shines ((electric))
Gert
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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blessings follow me
Do You See What I See...
Artasylum Smiles to your poem for the contest
There is one line I believe you can change ---The night shines ((electric))
Gert
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Gert for your input... always appreciated
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Artasylum
You are welcome
Gert
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a really good poem for this contest, good luck. It is a beautiful poem. I have tried to evaluate each verse and give you some feedback on which one is the strongest. The problem is I cannot decide. I do think the last two lines of the first verse are very well done. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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This is a really good poem for this contest, good luck. It is a beautiful poem. I have tried to evaluate each verse and give you some feedback on which one is the strongest. The problem is I cannot decide. I do think the last two lines of the first verse are very well done. Excellent work.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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I love this review... thanks di
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I love this! Angels amongst us following near. The imagery was awesome. Enjoyed how you made me FEEL the invisible angels in your midst and then progressing on to make me see a glimpse of those beautiful spirits. Loved how you described the 'presence' ... gentle breeze, bushes rustle, puffs of air, and 'vivid visions of vapor' (great alliteration).
Your poem makes me ponder the subject of angels in our world.
Great job!
Gale
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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I love this! Angels amongst us following near. The imagery was awesome. Enjoyed how you made me FEEL the invisible angels in your midst and then progressing on to make me see a glimpse of those beautiful spirits. Loved how you described the 'presence' ... gentle breeze, bushes rustle, puffs of air, and 'vivid visions of vapor' (great alliteration).
Your poem makes me ponder the subject of angels in our world.
Great job!
Gale
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Hey C. Gale thanks so much for your very spirited review and I'm honored by your words. xodi
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So very welcome!
Gale
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Generally, I prefer poetry that rhymes but every once in a while, I come
across one that catches my eye, this is one of them. Your poem is very descriptive making the reader feel he/she is a participant. Good luck.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Generally, I prefer poetry that rhymes but every once in a while, I come
across one that catches my eye, this is one of them. Your poem is very descriptive making the reader feel he/she is a participant. Good luck.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Willie... I'm honored to be the exception to your rule. Thanks for your stellar review. di
Comment from ESOSTINE
Dear ARTASYLUM, the creativity in the poem and the imagery of the presence of Angels revealing and inspiring your work was quite vivid. The flow and pace of the poem was very magical. Well done. Thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Dear ARTASYLUM, the creativity in the poem and the imagery of the presence of Angels revealing and inspiring your work was quite vivid. The flow and pace of the poem was very magical. Well done. Thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Esotine... I believe I just read one of your poems and enjoyed it very much... di
Comment from RGstar
Sometimes it doesn't take much. Something just right in all its simplicity. That simplicity which renders it vulnerable, innocent, virtuous, and most of all giving.
Beautifully said...an imagery pure.
Best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Sometimes it doesn't take much. Something just right in all its simplicity. That simplicity which renders it vulnerable, innocent, virtuous, and most of all giving.
Beautifully said...an imagery pure.
Best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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RG... coming from you high praise,,, I'm humbled by your words and was very pleasantly surprised by the stellar+ review you gifted me.
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You are welcome...really liked it...well written.
Comment from Crystal Clear Visions
You can weather any storm when the angels are near. Throughout the darkness comes light. Focus on your soul and everything will fall into place. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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You can weather any storm when the angels are near. Throughout the darkness comes light. Focus on your soul and everything will fall into place. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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I agree... keeping my angels near...
