Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
I have never heard of Grime and I am intrigued as to what sort of music this is. Your rhymes are spot on here and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
Comment from
rspoet
This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three very good rhymes and good connection between the lines.
Not familiar with Grime, but then I I don't much about grunge either.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021