Sing and be joyful
Singing lifts the spirit7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Sing and Be Joyful, has the right set up, uni-rhyme, and reminds the readers to do as it says and spread love to the world through song. Nice.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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This 1-6-1, Sing and Be Joyful, has the right set up, uni-rhyme, and reminds the readers to do as it says and spread love to the world through song. Nice.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thanks Bill.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fine rhyming words here for the contest and singing can indeed bring a positive vibe to our life, my friend belongs to a choir and she is always singing its praises, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Fine rhyming words here for the contest and singing can indeed bring a positive vibe to our life, my friend belongs to a choir and she is always singing its praises, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thanks Dolly. X
Comment from Mia Twysted
This sounds like something someone would say to someone right before they push them out on the stage. I see them taking a deep breath before closing their eyes and shocking the audience with their song.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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This sounds like something someone would say to someone right before they push them out on the stage. I see them taking a deep breath before closing their eyes and shocking the audience with their song.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thank Mia.
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
You managed to make a full and important point in this nicely rhyming poem. There is a joy in singing that your words and illustration depict very well
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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You managed to make a full and important point in this nicely rhyming poem. There is a joy in singing that your words and illustration depict very well
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank you Nancy
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:-)
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three solid rhymes and an uplifting theme.
Singing is universal in its appeal.
Even singing the blues can bring joy.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three solid rhymes and an uplifting theme.
Singing is universal in its appeal.
Even singing the blues can bring joy.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thanks Robert
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Thanks Robert
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, yes singing certainly lifts the spirit, and allows everyone to enjoy, and brings the faith of God to us, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Excellent, yes singing certainly lifts the spirit, and allows everyone to enjoy, and brings the faith of God to us, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thanks Kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme
that shows the joy in singing
the praises of hope.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme
that shows the joy in singing
the praises of hope.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much Pam.
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You are very welcome.
