Models
1,6,1 poem9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Models, has the right set up, uni-rhyme, and gives the readers a quick view of a modern zoological park at feeding time. Nice.
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This 1-6-1, Models, has the right set up, uni-rhyme, and gives the readers a quick view of a modern zoological park at feeding time. Nice.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2021
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
An excellent entry for the 1-6-1 contest. Very creative and clever and different. Loved the photograph, the association of model and queue and the entire presentation.
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An excellent entry for the 1-6-1 contest. Very creative and clever and different. Loved the photograph, the association of model and queue and the entire presentation.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Giraffes are a long necked animal. Giraffe tails are highly prized by many African cultures and are used in good-luck bracelets, fly whisks, and even thread for sewing or stringing beads. The world's tallest land animal is perhaps the giraffe.
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Giraffes are a long necked animal. Giraffe tails are highly prized by many African cultures and are used in good-luck bracelets, fly whisks, and even thread for sewing or stringing beads. The world's tallest land animal is perhaps the giraffe.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
Comment from Mia Twysted
Animals showing us humans how to share and be able to live in a piece and harmony with one another. I just love the picture you have it brings the reader further into the zoo in their minds.
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Animals showing us humans how to share and be able to live in a piece and harmony with one another. I just love the picture you have it brings the reader further into the zoo in their minds.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
Comment from Sally Law
Super FanStory Fantastic, mystery poet. The tall trio will bring home the prize for you, I think.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming vote,
Sally :))
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Super FanStory Fantastic, mystery poet. The tall trio will bring home the prize for you, I think.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming vote,
Sally :))
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, yes the animals do seem to showoff, display, and pose for us when they are being looked at, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Excellent, yes the animals do seem to showoff, display, and pose for us when they are being looked at, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good commentary about
the zoo, and how we can
appreciate the creatures there.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Great image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good commentary about
the zoo, and how we can
appreciate the creatures there.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
Comment from Pangalactic
Hi. Such few words but my mind was immediately full of sights and scents and somehow the annoyance of having to line up in a long queue.
I've never tried the 1-6-1 but I think it'd be tough to make impact with such limited floor space. You however have done that nicely.
Superb!
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Hi. Such few words but my mind was immediately full of sights and scents and somehow the annoyance of having to line up in a long queue.
I've never tried the 1-6-1 but I think it'd be tough to make impact with such limited floor space. You however have done that nicely.
Superb!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
Comment from Eternal Muse
I wish I had the six for it. When I saw your title, I thought maybe it's about human models. But giraffes do just well - look how graceful they are, with their long legs and necks (lol).
Stunning imagery, visuals and artistic presentation. Your picture is an absolute killer, I adored it.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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I wish I had the six for it. When I saw your title, I thought maybe it's about human models. But giraffes do just well - look how graceful they are, with their long legs and necks (lol).
Stunning imagery, visuals and artistic presentation. Your picture is an absolute killer, I adored it.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your review. I wasn't sure what to title this poem but zoo animals do seem to sometimes move like models on show.
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Oh, no - your title "Models" is pitch perfect!
