Upon the Stormy Deep
Let's get Kraken38 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Wow!
I didn't see that coming.
A well written and super dribble flash fiction entry.
Great choice of topic and complementary image .
Blessings
Shirley
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Wow!
I didn't see that coming.
A well written and super dribble flash fiction entry.
Great choice of topic and complementary image .
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Miranda. I enjoyed reading it. Your words mare well-chosen and create great imagery. Your words lead up to a suspenseful ending, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes, too. Respectfully with Admiration, Jan
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Miranda. I enjoyed reading it. Your words mare well-chosen and create great imagery. Your words lead up to a suspenseful ending, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes, too. Respectfully with Admiration, Jan
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
Comment from Melonie Kirchoff
Oooooh I loved your flash fiction story. I also liked "let's get kraken." You did a wonderful job of setting the scene and drawing the reader in. I almost got chills when I read the word "tentacles." Great job!
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Oooooh I loved your flash fiction story. I also liked "let's get kraken." You did a wonderful job of setting the scene and drawing the reader in. I almost got chills when I read the word "tentacles." Great job!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Miranda. It is an action filled flash fiction story. I find the subtitle to be very amusing. It has to be a Kraken, giant squid or a humongous octopus to do that sort of stuff. Kraken sounds reasonable. Robert
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Hello Miranda. It is an action filled flash fiction story. I find the subtitle to be very amusing. It has to be a Kraken, giant squid or a humongous octopus to do that sort of stuff. Kraken sounds reasonable. Robert
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
Comment from Janetsue
Oooh, you left this at such an exciting place...right at the edge of a cliff formed of fear. So many questions rise to the surface--did those deckhands breathe their last? Were they so wide-eyed they couldn't even think about hiding? Was the entire ship doomed? I really enjoyed reading this excellent posting!
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Oooh, you left this at such an exciting place...right at the edge of a cliff formed of fear. So many questions rise to the surface--did those deckhands breathe their last? Were they so wide-eyed they couldn't even think about hiding? Was the entire ship doomed? I really enjoyed reading this excellent posting!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I really like this. They must have seen the mythical kraken. I love the descriptive wording you've used in this. The line that stands out to me is "waves like obsidian mountains." I love it! I've enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
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I really like this. They must have seen the mythical kraken. I love the descriptive wording you've used in this. The line that stands out to me is "waves like obsidian mountains." I love it! I've enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great writing in this flash fiction story about a ship on the high seas experiencing a terrible storm. You have chosen the perfect picture, and great idea to include the image of the octopus. Thanks for sharing your creativity.
Bill
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Great writing in this flash fiction story about a ship on the high seas experiencing a terrible storm. You have chosen the perfect picture, and great idea to include the image of the octopus. Thanks for sharing your creativity.
Bill
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Suspense and fear in front of the obsidian waves tall as a mountain. Human nature it's a curious nature, therefor is going to be the perish of the pirates that stayed to watch the storm show. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Suspense and fear in front of the obsidian waves tall as a mountain. Human nature it's a curious nature, therefor is going to be the perish of the pirates that stayed to watch the storm show. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
Comment from Cindy Warren
Oh-oh, I think those pirates are done for. Imagine being out on deck and seeing that! I wonder what they were being punished for to be out there. I can't imagine anyone is that stupid.
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Oh-oh, I think those pirates are done for. Imagine being out on deck and seeing that! I wonder what they were being punished for to be out there. I can't imagine anyone is that stupid.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
Comment from w.j.debi
They were probably the first pirates to be eaten as well.
You create the setting well with the lightning and huge dark waves. It would be a spectacular sight, just before the Kracken appears. Great job. Best of luck in the contest.
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They were probably the first pirates to be eaten as well.
You create the setting well with the lightning and huge dark waves. It would be a spectacular sight, just before the Kracken appears. Great job. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
