Comment from Lindsey Russell

Excellent

I can't wait to finish this story. It's so good and it is unique from all the other stories I've read. I hope the story has a happy ending. Good luck with it and happy writing!

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I like every chapter but this one has a special way of drawing me in even further to the what-ifs as things continue to move forward. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Hi Barbara,
This is a very interesting chapter where you delve deeper into the relationship between Noah and Sami, and where you introduce a relationship and child between two people who were related to the house they are living in.

I figure you have something up with Amber and Jesse and the baby girl who was born to them. It was a sad story, but life tends to be full of such.

Hugs,
Rhonda

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 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024

Thank you for the kind review.