Life's new Breath
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The last line here is magical and brings the whole poem together, we meet those in life who infuse us with good things and change our world, I felt those changes here in your words, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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The last line here is magical and brings the whole poem together, we meet those in life who infuse us with good things and change our world, I felt those changes here in your words, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Life's New Breath, uses all the necessary words and says a big thank you to whom it is recognized brought the down and out back up and in.
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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This poem, Life's New Breath, uses all the necessary words and says a big thank you to whom it is recognized brought the down and out back up and in.
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Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much
