Finding his Princess (part two)
A story for the challenge.15 total reviews
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
Very cute happy script for a child's movie or cartoon, that has made me smile,
thanks a million for such a great exciting inspiration,
God bless your work,
Warm regards,
Sarah
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Very cute happy script for a child's movie or cartoon, that has made me smile,
thanks a million for such a great exciting inspiration,
God bless your work,
Warm regards,
Sarah
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for your nice review
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You’re very welcome )
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Patricia,
This is a very good ending to the story even though you aren't happy with it. I think we are always are own hardest critics. It ended on a happy note.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Patricia,
This is a very good ending to the story even though you aren't happy with it. I think we are always are own hardest critics. It ended on a happy note.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your time and you're nice review
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I enjoyed your ending, Patricia, as well as the whole story. I love happy endings the most and this was the happiest. This little contest of yours was fun to watch. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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I enjoyed your ending, Patricia, as well as the whole story. I love happy endings the most and this was the happiest. This little contest of yours was fun to watch. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for the nice review
Comment from GWHARGIS
There were a few spags, but since you are having problems with your vision I'm sure that's the cause. I liked your fairy tale of Nod and Gwendolyn. It was very entertaining. Gretchen
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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There were a few spags, but since you are having problems with your vision I'm sure that's the cause. I liked your fairy tale of Nod and Gwendolyn. It was very entertaining. Gretchen
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for stopping by my work. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent story but i dont see for which challenge. Possibly check on that. You use good imagery words and dialogue. Your image presentation supports your story well. I enjoyed this.
Alexandra xx :)
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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This is an excellent story but i dont see for which challenge. Possibly check on that. You use good imagery words and dialogue. Your image presentation supports your story well. I enjoyed this.
Alexandra xx :)
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It was a challenge when I first started it. I had left it off and asked people if they could help me with the ending because I was having problems. One person did that was Miistydawn she gave me a nice Ending possibility.
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That's wonderful! I love when we help each other here. 😊
