Infinite Possibilities
How I continue on even though the journey is rough.3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Yvette
This seems to be a free write. It reminds us that despite life's ups and downs and unsure outcomes, faith can get us through.
It should be come to pass not come to past.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas
Joan
P S I would like to let you know that I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile bio.
You can also find it by going on Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The interloper.
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Hi Yvette
This seems to be a free write. It reminds us that despite life's ups and downs and unsure outcomes, faith can get us through.
It should be come to pass not come to past.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas
Joan
P S I would like to let you know that I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile bio.
You can also find it by going on Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The interloper.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from susand3022
Hi Yvette,
I can feel what you are going after in your piece. I did find one typo in the third (line?)
-come to (past) (pass)
I say line that way because, well, it's really a paragraph, isn't it? Not really poetry. Just my opinion.
Susan :)
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Hi Yvette,
I can feel what you are going after in your piece. I did find one typo in the third (line?)
-come to (past) (pass)
I say line that way because, well, it's really a paragraph, isn't it? Not really poetry. Just my opinion.
Susan :)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from JT traveller
What an encouraging, enlightened piece of writing. You must have been through a lot to have all of these emotions flowing freely through you. Thankyou for sharing an intimate part of yourself.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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What an encouraging, enlightened piece of writing. You must have been through a lot to have all of these emotions flowing freely through you. Thankyou for sharing an intimate part of yourself.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much. I've been vulnerable and sentimental lately, so I figured writing would help. I'm very pleased you found my poem enlightening. Peace & Blessings to you.
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Thank you, JT traveller.
