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Dodie Rae and Bay Lynn receive a warning.
A chapter in the book Dodie Rae
The Brothers Four
by Neonewman

The diner's atmosphere was thick with an uneasy tension, punctuated only by the soft hiss of the coffee machine and the jangle of broken porcelain the waitress was sweeping away. Dodie Rae and Bay Lynn sat in a booth near the window next to one another. They could feel the dread of what was to come.
The third wolf approached, his gait confident yet cautious, and as he drew closer, the ruby flicker dimmed from his eyes, exposing a brilliant blue—seductive and serene, refracting light like a tranquil pool at dawn. Bay Lynn grasped the table edge as if it could anchor her.
"May I join you, ladies?" asked the man, locking eyes with Bay Lynn. An unexpected shift occurred. Deep and hollow, a voice echoed in her mind, like the reverberation of forgotten memories in an old, abandoned well. "I come with peaceful intentions."
Bay Lynn blinked, caught off guard as the words settled inside her. It wasn't just the manner of the speech but the certainty behind it that both intrigued and terrified her.
She shifted uncomfortably in her seat, narrowing her eyes at the stranger. His presence was a magnetic force that seemed to both beckon and warn: Come here; run away. Peaceful, huh? It doesn't feel peaceful.
The man's chuckle thrummed like a low rumble through the small space. "You're right. And I understand your hesitation. My kind tends to frighten, especially without warning." His smile was disarming, yet whatever lurked beneath its surface said otherwise. "But I assure you, I mean no harm."
"What the hell is going on here?" asked Dodie Rae. No one replied.
"Then why are you here?" Bay Lynn found her voice, steadying herself after realizing he had heard her thoughts. The warning instincts deep within her surged, and she fought to retain her composure.
"There are forces at play," he said, sincerity etched on his forehead. "We came to warn you."
His words hung like a distant storm approaching an unsuspecting town. Dodie Rae leaned in closer, the unease twisting into a need for information. "Warn us about what?"
The man also leaned in, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper. "About those who would seek to do you and your grandmother harm. The balance is shifting, and you both have a role in the chaos."
Bay Lynn exchanged a glance with Dodie Rae, uncertainty curling in the depths of their eyes. The world around them blurred, the noise fading into the background as they sat on the precipice of a revelation.
"And you think we need your help?" Dodie Rae asked, skepticism mingling with a sliver of fascination.
"I think you do," he replied, his blue eyes intensified. "Together, you are stronger than you realize, but you still need us."
"Us?" Bay Lynn asked.
"My brothers and I," he said.
The tension amplified with each passing moment. Once merely a refuge, the diner had transformed into a battleground of choices. As they pondered their next move, the air crackled with anticipation, ready to unveil a path neither of them could have foreseen.
His words settled around them, causing chills that raised the hair on Bay Lynn's neck and down her arms. The man's eyes bore into her soul, igniting unspoken fears she held deep within. Dodie Rae reached for her grandmother's hand, questions pricking her mind.
"Why should we trust you?" Dodie Rae's voice broke the silence, mixing curiosity with skepticism.
"Trust is all we have right now," he replied cryptically, his demeanor shifting slightly. "And we are running out of time."
Bay Lynn was interrupted as the door to the diner violently swung open, the hinges squeaked in protest. A tall figure stepped inside, wearing a faded black duster, casting an imposing shadow across the room. The atmosphere shifted yet again—this was no ordinary patron.
"Will," the newcomer called, his voice sharp and commanding, ripping through the silence. "We have to go. Now!"
Will's posture tightened, his calm exterior shifting urgently. "Not yet—"
Before he could finish, the stranger turned his eyes toward the two women. A smirk twisted his features. "Looks like you've found what you were looking for, Brother," he taunted, revealing sharp, glistening teeth. "But don't be fooled, Will. You know they're just pawns in a much larger game."
Bay Lynn felt her heart pound as the identical stranger stepped closer. The threat of his presence hung over her like a noose.
"Who are you?" Bay Lynn demanded, her voice steady despite the fear gripping her.
"Someone who can show you what lies beyond this moment," he replied, his stare fixated on her. "But you have to make a choice. Trust him," he pointed toward Will, "or turn away and face what's to come. And be warned. Another wolf is coming for you both."
Dodie Rae exchanged a frantic glance with Bay Lynn, sensing the change in the air. The once comforting diner now trembled under the weight of impending danger.
Outside the diner, two men, identical to the two inside, stood as sentinels, their expressions stoic as they scanned the darkness, their presence like a silent promise of protection—or perhaps a baleful warning.
With a breathless pause, the lights in the diner flickered, casting a strobe of light and shadows across the room.
Will stepped between them and his twin, tension energizing the space. "You need to leave, Henry," he warned, his voice low and tense.
"Or what?" said Henry, parting his lips once more. "You think you can protect them. You, alone? The balance is already shifting in favor of those who thirst for chaos. They'll never be safe with only you by their side."
Bay Lynn felt the ground beneath them shift. Time felt like it had stalled, the impending decision rushing toward them like a freight train.
"Trust me," Will urged, desperation leaking into his tone.
Henry laughed, a chilling sound that resonated in the small room. "They can't afford to trust anyone, Will. Not even you."
Suddenly, the door swung open again, this time with a force that shattered the glass as a flash of blinding light filled the diner, engulfing everything in an intense brilliance.
Then, just as quickly as it had come, the light vanished, but not before leaving a heavy silence in its wake.
The cloaked figure and Will were gone when they blinked to regain their vision.
"What just happened?" Dodie Rae whispered, barely keeping her composure.
Bay Lynn didn't have an answer. As uncertainty enveloped them, they could feel the cargo of choices yet made. No one else in the diner seemed affected, busying themselves as if nothing had happened. But for Dodie Rae and Bay Lynn, the world had irrevocably changed. The question now looming was: what fate awaited them without Will at their side?
And in the unsettling quiet, a new message flashed across Bay Lynn's phone, illuminating the screen: "You have until morning to make your decision. The clock is ticking as another wolf approaches."
Dodie Rae: Abused wife of her late husband Richard.
Sadie Barlow: Head of The Women Support and Shelter of Orange County.
Samantha (Sam): Girl from support group, married to Keith.
Keith: Sam's abusive husband
Officer Daniel Carey: Orange County policeman.
Officer Tim Riley: Orange County policeman.
Clara Leeds: Abused wife of Martin Leads.
Martin Leeds: Clara's husband.
Helen Morgan: Abused common-law wife of Pete Carrington.
Maggie Reynolds: Abused wife of Ben Reynolds.
Bay Lynn: Dodie Rae's Grandmother, known as Mama.
Luke Riker: Bearded man killed with Ben Reynolds.
Steven Miller: Texas Wildlife and Game expert.
Pete Carrington: Helen Morgan's abusive Common Law husband.
May Riley: Officer Tim Riley's wife.
Dr. Eddard: Attending physician in the E.R.
Geena Burkhart: Dodie Rae's high school nemesis.
Will: The third wolf.
Henry: The third wolf's twin brother.
And a special thank you to Karen Cherry Threadgill for the accompanying artwork.






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