Comment from Nicki.B

Exceptional

I always enjoy the nature scenes you portray in your poems. You have a wonderful way to capture the beauty around us. Excellent work, written beautifully. I love the name also. Well done so enjoyable.
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024

Thank you Nicki so much for the extra star, the wonderful words and lovely review

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Babbling Brookes are so full of life. I enjoy sitting by them and watching all the fun things that they have to share. Your poem is beautiful and very descriptive. I enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing it with us.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024

Thank you Barbara for your lovely review

Comment from Karen Cherry

Excellent

A very lovely poem, however, your lines are smashed on top of each other. Can you put a space between every line?
Others may stop reading and not review. I almost did.
Good writing though:-)

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 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024

hi karen. I changed the font. Thanks to your honesty in this review. I appreciate it very much. And thanks for such a wonderful review

reply by Karen Cherry on 14-Nov-2024

You are welcome. You write very well. Karen