Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Interesting concept. The letter form was well written an the idea is a new one. I think many will enjoy the sarcastic humor and this should do well in the contest. I saw nothing to improve.

Good luck.

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 Comment Written 25-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022

I appreciate this very, very much. How do you feel about the tag? (Hell really doth have no fury? Does the 'doth' land or does it just sound stupid? I keep going back and forth with that.)

reply by lancellot on 25-Aug-2022

It works and fits with the contest's theme.

reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022

Okay. Thank you. I appreciate the additional feedback. I trust your judgment.

reply by lancellot on 25-Aug-2022

One last thing. Not story related, just FanStory related, an FYI

You have a good story. Too good and too expensive. When you do that first or early in the contest, it will scare others away. So, the pool and entries will be reduced. It is best to wait to near the end of the time limit. And don't use the two day cert when paying a lot (it's wasteful). Always use the full certificate.

reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022

You wonderful, savvy helper, you! Thank you for making me smarter today. xo