very creative, i gave it a six star rating and my vote
This has wonderful imagery
Nice little Cinderella twist. Imaginative images of Winter in her pretty dress, escorted by the wind, dancing to the music of wind chimes. Well done rhymes, rhythm, flow.
Normally I would never complain about not being able to vote for my own poem, but the entry "Winter's Dance" is extraordinary. Unfortunately, it is my second choice because the iambic meter in the antepenultimate line was never corrected.
Liked the form and the message. Ine
This one is my favorite.
Beautiful and haunting. I loved it.
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