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Comments For Dad (A Clarity Pyramid) by Melspoems

So much said in so few words.
Highlights a problem of our day

Intense, vivid and filled with emotion.

powerful write.

Comments For Wife by kiwigirl2821

Aye

Comments For s l o w by shelley kaye

Depicts the wedding ceremony with such clarity. Well done.

I simply liked the feeling it gave me. Wonderful writing, hopeful ... I liked that.

Captures a bride's feelings of hope for the future.

I found this poem heart warming.