TurtleLion13: Sometimes I feel like my thoughts are locked somewhere deep within my mind and the only way to get them out is with a pen and a piece of paper.
    William Walz: Better than using a scalpel and retractors. -


TurtleLion13: Working on a poem for my mom for her bday but im a tad stuck.
    DIS-illusioned: 'Kool' screen name, girl!
    Kool hat!
    Why the scowl and long face--who you mad at? LOL
    Thanks for becoming a fan. Can I offer some help on your mom's b/day poem? -
    DIS-illusioned: 1. Use rhyming couplets--let two lines rhyme with each other.
    2. Talk about your mom's physical beauty.
    3. Talk about how smart she is.
    4. Talk about how she's there for you, and others.
    5. Talk about how other folks value and love her.
    6. Talk about her faith or belief in God--if she has such beliefs and is religious.
    7. Finally, say something personally sweet--from your heart--about her (and, 'I love you, Ma' won't cut it--LOL).
    Good luck! And a very happy B/DAY to your dear, dear mama! :)) -
    TurtleLion13: Thank you for the ideas. I find them very helpfull. -


TurtleLion13: "If you can dream it you can achieve it" its the cover to the notebook I write all my poems in. It is my life line.
    DIS-illusioned: I dream of being Eros, the god of love ... *Still waiting for the achieving part...*
    :) -