Within the Bone
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "A Late Night Plan"A tale of love, magic, and revenge.
2 total reviews
Comment from AJ McCall
Aww, this was so sweet, compared to the other chapters and everything. I love Aallotar: she's my favorite in this chapter. I love how you show the playfulness of two new friends. The journey into the Mara's town is of course going to be dangerous, why wouldn't it? And their fates are entwined... so cool. Well, didn't find any mistakes and I really enjoyed this chapter, one of my favorites! Can't wait to read the next one!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Aww, this was so sweet, compared to the other chapters and everything. I love Aallotar: she's my favorite in this chapter. I love how you show the playfulness of two new friends. The journey into the Mara's town is of course going to be dangerous, why wouldn't it? And their fates are entwined... so cool. Well, didn't find any mistakes and I really enjoyed this chapter, one of my favorites! Can't wait to read the next one!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for reviewing! I thought it might be time for something a bit lighter in tone before returning to Sjaligr, plus they needed bonding time. I appreciate the feedback! Happy writing.
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You're very welcome! Very happy to hear that! Happy writing to you as well!
Comment from Shirley McLain
Excellent and well-written chapter. I like your characters. They are active and the dialogue is appropriate. You did a great job as I found no errors. Have a good evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Excellent and well-written chapter. I like your characters. They are active and the dialogue is appropriate. You did a great job as I found no errors. Have a good evening. Shirley
Comment Written 10-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for reviewing! I really appreciate it and I'm glad the characters are coming out well.
