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Learn Life's Lessons

Free Will, we can make choices

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Comment from Margaret Bednar
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A prayerful abecdarian poem that offers wisdom to those who are struggling. Good use of long, wraparound sentences that flow nicely into each other. Well penned.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
    Margaret, thank you so much. When I first tackled this poetic style, I was wrongly assuming that the writing would be easy, I found this, not to be the case.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This abecedarian poem, Learn Life's Lessons, follows the vertical and alphabetical theme formatting and give numerous pieces of advice which eventually come to getting closer to God and seeking divine guidance.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
    Bill good tracking...my first and probably last stab at this poetic style, not favorite. LOL
Comment from equestrik
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There is a lot of information advice and wisdom in these lines of your abecdarian poem. Nicely written and very creative. Best of luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
    Thank you I admit this one was more of a task than I would have thought. Have a splendid weekend.