Daydreams from the Ashes
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Gift of Gravity"Poems and meditations
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Comment from Tina Crute
This is a lovely poem that comes straight from your heart to your spouse. I love the honesty, that you found comfort in empty things, but now know better. It just makes the poem personal and valuable You have some extra characters in your title. They pop up now and then in mine also. Great write!
Tina
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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This is a lovely poem that comes straight from your heart to your spouse. I love the honesty, that you found comfort in empty things, but now know better. It just makes the poem personal and valuable You have some extra characters in your title. They pop up now and then in mine also. Great write!
Tina
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate it. Those extra character problems are still something I?m getting used to with FanStory.
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I know! It can look fine...and you save and they appear!
Have a great day!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Certainly not a traditional sonnet, but full of emotion from the heart! ;) A great love poem with a wonderful final line! :) Thanx for sharing! ;)
Be sure to pop back in there and eliminate the gnome graffiti from your title tag line... ;) :)
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Certainly not a traditional sonnet, but full of emotion from the heart! ;) A great love poem with a wonderful final line! :) Thanx for sharing! ;)
Be sure to pop back in there and eliminate the gnome graffiti from your title tag line... ;) :)
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for reviewing. I really appreciate it. That gnome graffiti is driving me a little crazy, so I?m sorry it leaked in here.
