Savoring the Nectar
A Terza Rima for the Potlatch Challenge15 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
What a spectacular picture capturing a rare moment! I admired your matching title plus the Terza Rima form and its rhymes. Here's to embracing "life to the fullest". Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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What a spectacular picture capturing a rare moment! I admired your matching title plus the Terza Rima form and its rhymes. Here's to embracing "life to the fullest". Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you for stopping by to share your thoughts and for the generous rating!
Comment from Sugarray77
This is so very good, June! I know the complications and challenges that come from writing this form and I wholeheartedly applaud you on both execution and theme. So very well done!
Melissa
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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This is so very good, June! I know the complications and challenges that come from writing this form and I wholeheartedly applaud you on both execution and theme. So very well done!
Melissa
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Instead of wasting moments counting time,
I'll savor all the nectar I can find, - I love your opening lines June, and can relate to them at the moment in my own life. My tears fall because this is so very nicely done, and so very apt for me at this time,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Instead of wasting moments counting time,
I'll savor all the nectar I can find, - I love your opening lines June, and can relate to them at the moment in my own life. My tears fall because this is so very nicely done, and so very apt for me at this time,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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So glad this piece resonated with you. Thank you for sharing your insightful and empathetic sentiments.
Comment from Bill Schott
This terza rima, Savor the Nectar, has the proper formatting and reminds the reader that life is short band that we must gather our nectar while we may.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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This terza rima, Savor the Nectar, has the proper formatting and reminds the reader that life is short band that we must gather our nectar while we may.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Amen!! Here, here! and I'll drink to that, my lady!! ;) What a beautiful offering with the perfect message: LIVE without shackles!! ;) :) A wonderful Terza Rima that brings the reader into your glorious enjoyment of the life we are given - thanx for sharing, June! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Amen!! Here, here! and I'll drink to that, my lady!! ;) What a beautiful offering with the perfect message: LIVE without shackles!! ;) :) A wonderful Terza Rima that brings the reader into your glorious enjoyment of the life we are given - thanx for sharing, June! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts and for the generous rating!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written Terza Rima poem you have penned for the potlatch poetry event. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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This is a very nice and well written Terza Rima poem you have penned for the potlatch poetry event. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from zanya
And what an exciting goal that is 'Embrace life to the fullest'- since we only get one chance at life - a poem filled with hope 'embracing all- including the bizarre '-
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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And what an exciting goal that is 'Embrace life to the fullest'- since we only get one chance at life - a poem filled with hope 'embracing all- including the bizarre '-
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you! Must not take life for granted these days!
Comment from juliaSjames
This is excellent work June. You are such a fine poet and a master of forms that are still beyond my reach.
With great skill and heartfelt emotion you extend the metaphor in superb fashion. Breathtaking!
My favourite stanza:
"Though dreams don't have an expiration date,
procrastination keeps them in a jar -
like butterflies in time they suffocate."
Carpe diem.
Stay safe
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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This is excellent work June. You are such a fine poet and a master of forms that are still beyond my reach.
With great skill and heartfelt emotion you extend the metaphor in superb fashion. Breathtaking!
My favourite stanza:
"Though dreams don't have an expiration date,
procrastination keeps them in a jar -
like butterflies in time they suffocate."
Carpe diem.
Stay safe
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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I am so glad this piece resonated with you! We must never take life for granted.
Comment from Cindy Decker
June, your poem is excellent. I, myself, procrastinate every day. I can't imagine how my life would have been if I had done things right away.
Your use of nectar as being the sweet things in life, and your allegory about butterflies make your poem enticing; you give the reader hope in the end.
Very fine poem.
Best wishes,
Cindy.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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June, your poem is excellent. I, myself, procrastinate every day. I can't imagine how my life would have been if I had done things right away.
Your use of nectar as being the sweet things in life, and your allegory about butterflies make your poem enticing; you give the reader hope in the end.
Very fine poem.
Best wishes,
Cindy.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you for sharing your encouraging feedback!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written terza rima about the butterflies' quest to gather nectar to pollunate the flowers wherever they go from there to make sure next year there will be more.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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A very well-written terza rima about the butterflies' quest to gather nectar to pollunate the flowers wherever they go from there to make sure next year there will be more.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you!
