Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

There is nothing like paddling in the sea to lift your spirit and being at one with nature Trisha and I do it often, I enjoyed your words here today, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020

My dad used to paddle wearing a shirt, tie, and jacket! It is calming and no one thought it strange back then (60 years ago)
Thanks for your review, it added pleasant memories to my day.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Love your turquoise water, that reminds me about something that I have not tasted this summer:"Her lull before the storm is there
Calm 'in the moment' thoughts
The storm a human jungle scene
A fast paced competitive whirl
Spent in man designed sunshine
Turquoise vistas will become grey " Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020

Thanks for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

I like your serene and appealing free verse based on the lovely picture

The between spaces are part of the cycle of life. You capture those feelings with deft strokes of your poetic brush.

Small typo,
"Chrystal" should be "Crystal"

Stay safe
Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020

Thanks for your complimentary review, and for catching my typo.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is very Beautiful writing, turquoise sea standing in the calm ocean, between celestial heavens, to appreciate what god has given life contentment now reappears. I can feel that contentment just by looking at your imagery. It's absolutely breathtaking view. Awesome job. breathtaking view.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020

Thank you for your very complimentary review. I?m glad you got benefit from my words
Hugs, Trisha

reply by Joanne Gill-Maddick on 19-Sep-2020

Your welcome

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about an excellent interpretation of the picture from the picture this club. The girl standing in the water has much to contemplate about and she can do it peacefully there.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020

Thanks for a great review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Kingsrookviii

Exceptional

I love this. It really speaks of detoxing from the stresses of modern living and attests to the healing power of nature. The language is soft and easy, to fit or rather set the mood, also. Well done in every area. Bruce.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020

Thank you very much for an excellent review, it made my day! I?m glad you enjoyed the read
Hugs, Trisha