Finally Found
After seeing the news tonight...16 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Any death is traumatic and impacts our soul. This poem draws the heartstrings like nothing I have read lately. I can picture the scene in my mind's eye. Well written!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Any death is traumatic and impacts our soul. This poem draws the heartstrings like nothing I have read lately. I can picture the scene in my mind's eye. Well written!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Rebecca, thanks for this very kind review and beautiful stars!
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you're welcome.
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:))
Comment from amada
Oh dear...this is truly some terrible tragedy. You were able to bring out beautiful poetry about it. The image you describe is abundant in love and compassion. Blessings.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Oh dear...this is truly some terrible tragedy. You were able to bring out beautiful poetry about it. The image you describe is abundant in love and compassion. Blessings.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Amada, thanks for this very kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
This is sad to hear of a life ended tragically. There are so many things on the news to make you feel bad. My daughter refused to listen to the news but I don't think we can't make bad things go away by not listening. We have hopes of a better world. You've told the story well in your poem.
Beth
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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This is sad to hear of a life ended tragically. There are so many things on the news to make you feel bad. My daughter refused to listen to the news but I don't think we can't make bad things go away by not listening. We have hopes of a better world. You've told the story well in your poem.
Beth
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thanks, Beth. A beautiful review.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I am glad this poem begins prosaically, it puts clearly in place where we are in this horrible world of fake news.
I am even gladder when your words turn whimsical, and then even move to totally against the sorrowful truth. you show strong imagination and hope, even where there is none.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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I am glad this poem begins prosaically, it puts clearly in place where we are in this horrible world of fake news.
I am even gladder when your words turn whimsical, and then even move to totally against the sorrowful truth. you show strong imagination and hope, even where there is none.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Katherine, thanks for this beautiful review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow... such a haunting visage you've painted for us here, my lady... A very well-done free verse to convey an awful message... But thanx for lending your talented pen! ;) Yvette
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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Wow... such a haunting visage you've painted for us here, my lady... A very well-done free verse to convey an awful message... But thanx for lending your talented pen! ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Yvette, for this very kind review.
Comment from royowen
That is obviously distressing to you, but more than that, I love how you describe this, definitely a poetic way, and a very interesting but distressing for her loved ones, I love how you've gone about this, bless you my talented friend, well done, blessings Roy
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That is obviously distressing to you, but more than that, I love how you describe this, definitely a poetic way, and a very interesting but distressing for her loved ones, I love how you've gone about this, bless you my talented friend, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanks, Roy, as always for this great review.
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Bless you girl
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Thank you. I felt so sad.
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You would dear girl
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The girl will be in Heaven now. Roy, she looked so vulnerable in that cold lake, even dead she was a beautiful young angel-like young girl. Bless you.
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So sad Marjon,
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Sigh.
