Comment from
Eternal Muse
A great little poem and presentation. I love the artwork; your creative imagery and visuals; thank you for giving us examples of the form; I personally never tried Lanterne poetry; but I am tempted, the more entries I read today of the form.
Good luck in the contest, and thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from
LisaMay
Maybe it's true, maybe it isn't (mine could do with being plucked). Your poem's presentation is a lovely little package, expressing a hope that time will fix things. "Love Notes" is a good choice for the title, bringing in music.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
Thanks for reviewing zanya