Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Searching"My Collection of Love Poetry
9 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely rhyming poem Trish, lovely rhythm and beautiful thoughts. I was lucky to find that one that made my world complete and in these days without him - my heart aches -
valda.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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A lovely rhyming poem Trish, lovely rhythm and beautiful thoughts. I was lucky to find that one that made my world complete and in these days without him - my heart aches -
valda.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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I?m sorry you lost your soulmate, valda. You honored me with your review and six stars, thank you.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
So seldom does one find their soulmate, but that doesn't mean they shouldn't keep looking. Love can happen when you least expect it. Good meter and rhyme. "Maybe mine" should be "may be mine."
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So seldom does one find their soulmate, but that doesn't mean they shouldn't keep looking. Love can happen when you least expect it. Good meter and rhyme. "Maybe mine" should be "may be mine."
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem about searching for loved and maybe have a second chance of true love is not always easy at an older age. There are a few that have such chance and they should take that chance.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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A very well-written rhyming poem about searching for loved and maybe have a second chance of true love is not always easy at an older age. There are a few that have such chance and they should take that chance.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved the sentiments here Trisha and you really pulled my heart strings with your words here, I loved the melody and the warmth here, we can all find love if we look hard enough, much enjoyed, a well deserved six from me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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I loved the sentiments here Trisha and you really pulled my heart strings with your words here, I loved the melody and the warmth here, we can all find love if we look hard enough, much enjoyed, a well deserved six from me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Wow! What a great review, thank you so much,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Ben B.
Ah, a classic atmosphere. Searching for a soul mate is tough work. That last line however feels a bit of a let down. Then again love can be that way sometimes.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Ah, a classic atmosphere. Searching for a soul mate is tough work. That last line however feels a bit of a let down. Then again love can be that way sometimes.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(typos: of which s/b of whom; maybe mine s/b may be; tweak lines for flow--reduce syllable count (line 4 sugg: Completion to my lonely days) Rhyme and rhythm are a bit off; sentiments are poignantly conveyed! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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(typos: of which s/b of whom; maybe mine s/b may be; tweak lines for flow--reduce syllable count (line 4 sugg: Completion to my lonely days) Rhyme and rhythm are a bit off; sentiments are poignantly conveyed! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem reads well, although poignant, BL. There is good flow, good rhymes, and great imagery. I agree with what you state. You give readers much to think about in a good way. Sharing a smile or their time is great, and who knows. . .?
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Your poem reads well, although poignant, BL. There is good flow, good rhymes, and great imagery. I agree with what you state. You give readers much to think about in a good way. Sharing a smile or their time is great, and who knows. . .?
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from RShipp
Finding love and friendship in new relationships is a hard task.
I enjoyed the 'search' that your poem provided.
Wouldn't it be great if when we met someone new the "I am that person of which you speak' would ring loudly in our ears!
Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Finding love and friendship in new relationships is a hard task.
I enjoyed the 'search' that your poem provided.
Wouldn't it be great if when we met someone new the "I am that person of which you speak' would ring loudly in our ears!
Enjoyed!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from tfawcus
One gets a sense of heartache and yearning from your poem. I like the way you have reinforced it with the subtle echo of occasional internal rhyme.
I guess one has to cast a line out to catch a fish!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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One gets a sense of heartache and yearning from your poem. I like the way you have reinforced it with the subtle echo of occasional internal rhyme.
I guess one has to cast a line out to catch a fish!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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My line was cast, the boot was bigger than the fish! I?m too old to cast .another line.Thanks for your kind review, Tony - if the poem gave you that sense, then my objective was met.
Hugs, Trisha
