Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

I love reading auras. I think I've been aware of them most of my life. Mysterious auras are the most challenging. Is is deception or deep spirituality?? This is good topic to have addressed.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

A lovely poem, and I like your artwork and rhyming. I think, though, the chosen font color is jarring to the eyes on this background and very small to read. I would consider a different, lighter, color font to improve presentation and make for easier read.

I wish you luck in that contest.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review and suggestion. I have changed the colour which I hope improves your read.

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

This is a very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. It has a nice feel to it, a bit melancholic and mysterious which makes it fun to read. Thanks for sharing this and best of luck with the competition.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

A most interesting poem, especially given the mysterious eyes, that is captured in the aura generated by the person. The sense is one of friendliness, but will only be discovered when invited to do so.

Wishing you great luck in the voting booth mystery author.

Gloria

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review Gloria. Much appreciated.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

And if you go to certain universities you may never know since they are encouraging their students to wear masks during sex!! (Univ of Georgia)... Ugh! ;) A fun offering for the contest here giving a modern twist to the 'masked man'... ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020

Just shows how weird the world's getting. Glad you enjoyed the poem.

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

A mysterious and alluring write. The mystery, of course, adds to the allure. I think you answered the contest requirements well. This is very nicely done!

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-A well written poem
with good syllable count,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the opening line, followed
by questions, and a very
good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

reply by Pam (respa) on 15-Aug-2020

You are quite welcome.