Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Eye for an Eye"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello your five line poem gave me sad felling
To read On a river of wounds, tears
flow on endlessly.
Thank you for sharing.
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Hello your five line poem gave me sad felling
To read On a river of wounds, tears
flow on endlessly.
Thank you for sharing.
Gert
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Gert, I appreciate your words, thank you for your time invested in reading and commenting on my poem.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
JLR: great vision of the eye and tears for your poetry. Why are people crying with people homeless, being at home with the covid crisis, and the world's mess. Too many people are dying. It's time to pray to God.
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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JLR: great vision of the eye and tears for your poetry. Why are people crying with people homeless, being at home with the covid crisis, and the world's mess. Too many people are dying. It's time to pray to God.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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flylikeaneagle, Around the world we see pain, insecurity, uncertainty, what we don't' see is a groundswell of people of there knees praying and seeking God's Peace and Grace.
Comment from Raul1
Very artistic with the eye picture making it rain. The poem is crafty and sentences flow well. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your piece of poetry. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Very artistic with the eye picture making it rain. The poem is crafty and sentences flow well. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your piece of poetry. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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thank you for your time invested in reading and commenting on my poem.
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You're welcome!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Eye for an Eye", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth.This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read a review.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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"Eye for an Eye", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth.This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read a review.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Duchess, I thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.
JLR,
as always, you're very welcome.
God bless, take care and stay free!
the Duchess
Comment from ameen786
"Eye for an eye, why."--we all must ask this powerful question everytime we face a mirror; you packed volumes in so few words; picture adds to the theme; thanks for sharing and good luck!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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"Eye for an eye, why."--we all must ask this powerful question everytime we face a mirror; you packed volumes in so few words; picture adds to the theme; thanks for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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ameen, thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was very well expressed. You packed volumes in these lines. I like your descriptive imagery, your visuals, your artistic presentation and artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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This was very well expressed. You packed volumes in these lines. I like your descriptive imagery, your visuals, your artistic presentation and artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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EM, thank you for your time to review and comment on this poem.
Comment from Colin John
An excellent contest entry for the five-line poem and I think it works really well considering only five lines, good luck and I will be looking out for this one. Cheers
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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An excellent contest entry for the five-line poem and I think it works really well considering only five lines, good luck and I will be looking out for this one. Cheers
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Colin, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my short poem, have a splendid weekend!
Comment from Ben Colder
Some people are so vindictive when the call is in the Almighty's corner of judgement. Words sometimes are golden by not being said.
Good short poem with depth.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Some people are so vindictive when the call is in the Almighty's corner of judgement. Words sometimes are golden by not being said.
Good short poem with depth.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Ben sad but true, thanks for reviewing and commenting on my work.
Comment from gramalot8
This is a very thought provoking poem for this contest. It's hard to get a great message with some restrictions in the word count. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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This is a very thought provoking poem for this contest. It's hard to get a great message with some restrictions in the word count. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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gramalot, yes the Why? allows for us to question mankind's vindictive nature.
Comment from Writeling
This poem asks many questions. I particularly like:
'eye for an eye, why?'
Your image tells us all we need to imagine. The syllable count fits well.
kind regards, Writeling
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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This poem asks many questions. I particularly like:
'eye for an eye, why?'
Your image tells us all we need to imagine. The syllable count fits well.
kind regards, Writeling
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Writeling, thanks for your time to review and comment on my short poem.
