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Comment from Sally Law
Sorry I missed this last week. I ran out of sixes and time. Here's to another great chapter and hopefully we can get these chapters ranked at All Time Best. Great chapter.
Sending you my best although belated,
Sal XOs......
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Sorry I missed this last week. I ran out of sixes and time. Here's to another great chapter and hopefully we can get these chapters ranked at All Time Best. Great chapter.
Sending you my best although belated,
Sal XOs......
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm sorry you had to read this with no money attached.
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Ah, no worries. My great pleasure. XOs......
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, Barbra, you are tying up the ends beautifully, and this chapter is riveting -- the action you have managed in a (technically?) non-action chapter shows a serious talent, my friend.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Wow, Barbra, you are tying up the ends beautifully, and this chapter is riveting -- the action you have managed in a (technically?) non-action chapter shows a serious talent, my friend.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from eliz100
The writing is great as usual. There are a couple issues. I*n the first section you wrote, "I will return this later this afternoon. Return what?
In section 18, you wrote ,I see you are well taken car(e) of,
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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The writing is great as usual. There are a couple issues. I*n the first section you wrote, "I will return this later this afternoon. Return what?
In section 18, you wrote ,I see you are well taken car(e) of,
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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I will check those areas out. Thank you.
Comment from estory
The dialogue is crisp as ever, we have plenty of intrigue going on but the action level has gone down some. The crime ring seems to be hovering in the background here while Trey and Logan and Mackenzie put their leads together and debate how to arrest the man in charge of it all. A bit of romance thrown in. Could it be the calm before the storm? we'll have to await the next chapter. estory
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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The dialogue is crisp as ever, we have plenty of intrigue going on but the action level has gone down some. The crime ring seems to be hovering in the background here while Trey and Logan and Mackenzie put their leads together and debate how to arrest the man in charge of it all. A bit of romance thrown in. Could it be the calm before the storm? we'll have to await the next chapter. estory
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the encrouagement. I appreciate it.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I can understand what Nancy is saying, but it's not going to happen. Mac won't stop until Megan's murderer is brought to justice. And no one will be able to stop her. I'm sure Logan is with her on that, too. But he'll be even more protective of Mac. This is hotting up now that they have a better lead. Well done, Barbara! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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I can understand what Nancy is saying, but it's not going to happen. Mac won't stop until Megan's murderer is brought to justice. And no one will be able to stop her. I'm sure Logan is with her on that, too. But he'll be even more protective of Mac. This is hotting up now that they have a better lead. Well done, Barbara! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Your chapters always seem to have a mix of things that touch or enliven me in different ways. Peppered with a layer of real life and a few of others' wants and wishes. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Your chapters always seem to have a mix of things that touch or enliven me in different ways. Peppered with a layer of real life and a few of others' wants and wishes. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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My attempt is to make them real. Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from BethShelby
Nicely written chapter. It sounds like Mac is going to give up into the case is solved. Logan's parents are very grateful for everything she has done and done want to her to take any more risks. I look forward to more.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Nicely written chapter. It sounds like Mac is going to give up into the case is solved. Logan's parents are very grateful for everything she has done and done want to her to take any more risks. I look forward to more.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Well the little spitfire will ride again. I bet she solves this. Smart is not smart it seems. I read thei and smiled. When I was in business I leased all my vehicles from Smart Chevrolet. They did a good job.
Is that wedding bells I hear in the background?
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Well the little spitfire will ride again. I bet she solves this. Smart is not smart it seems. I read thei and smiled. When I was in business I leased all my vehicles from Smart Chevrolet. They did a good job.
Is that wedding bells I hear in the background?
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Maybe in the background. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love the chapter, I like when law enforcement jurisdictions give a hand to each other. Happy that Mac is better and ready for action. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Love the chapter, I like when law enforcement jurisdictions give a hand to each other. Happy that Mac is better and ready for action. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
Well, it looks like Logan's mum and dad don't want any collateral damage to happen anymore, but the safety of society is at risk, so the likes of Sidney Parks, needs to be put away. Not to mention Ivan Smart. A super episode Barbara, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Well, it looks like Logan's mum and dad don't want any collateral damage to happen anymore, but the safety of society is at risk, so the likes of Sidney Parks, needs to be put away. Not to mention Ivan Smart. A super episode Barbara, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome