Save The Children
A contest poem...34 total reviews
Comment from Blu Rider
"Exposure - the weapon
Dark to Light"
Exposure - perhaps the only effective weapon available.
Dark to Light - the process mostly all awoken and aware citizens are participating in worldwide.
And I do believe the inhuman individuals who are/have been involved in this crime against humanity are about to be exposed, big time.
I find your six well chosen words effective and apposite with regard to the current state of affairs, and I wish you the best of luck in this contest.
Regards, Blu
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"Exposure - the weapon
Dark to Light"
Exposure - perhaps the only effective weapon available.
Dark to Light - the process mostly all awoken and aware citizens are participating in worldwide.
And I do believe the inhuman individuals who are/have been involved in this crime against humanity are about to be exposed, big time.
I find your six well chosen words effective and apposite with regard to the current state of affairs, and I wish you the best of luck in this contest.
Regards, Blu
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
This is a very beautiful poem written in 6 words. I LOVE it!
I haven't gotten time to be on FS too much, with school, extra homework, and other classes. The most I can do is write something for school, then post it on FS, just for fun (and reply to the comments, of course)! But I'm really glad I got some time today to read this poem. As I said before, I really like it!
-Tanvi Pauddar :)
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This is a very beautiful poem written in 6 words. I LOVE it!
I haven't gotten time to be on FS too much, with school, extra homework, and other classes. The most I can do is write something for school, then post it on FS, just for fun (and reply to the comments, of course)! But I'm really glad I got some time today to read this poem. As I said before, I really like it!
-Tanvi Pauddar :)
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Look at you.... disappear for a while and then 'bam!' a really powerful offering in but six words -- well done, my lady!! ;) *Sorry, I'm really waaay behind, but it is what it is, I suppose... Take care out there! :) ;)
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Look at you.... disappear for a while and then 'bam!' a really powerful offering in but six words -- well done, my lady!! ;) *Sorry, I'm really waaay behind, but it is what it is, I suppose... Take care out there! :) ;)
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Hello my friend, sorry for the delay, life has changed a lot since the Covid invaded our country! Longer work hours, family size increase and too much going on to focus on writing right now. I miss you very much and hope to be back here writing more very soon! appreciate you stopped to read this. These precious are so important. :) xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Diana, prayers are needed for child trafficking. It's a worry because this type of uncalled event is happening everywhere. I agree that we must prevent and stop this kind of tragedy.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Diana, prayers are needed for child trafficking. It's a worry because this type of uncalled event is happening everywhere. I agree that we must prevent and stop this kind of tragedy.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Hi Rosemary! sorry to be so late in responding. Life has changed so much since Covid and it has been hard to get back to my writing. Hopefully, work and my home will settle down here soon and I can get back to my passion. Appreciate you stopped to read this about these precious ones. xoxoxoxo
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I find the same thing...not enough time to write. So I understand.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Diana, I did miss you. Glad you are back.
This is such a tragic subject you write about and certainly, I hope it makes many much more aware.
The number you quote is unbelievable. Truly tragic. How, I wonder can it be stopped, since it is a criminal act done so secretly.
Ralf
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Diana, I did miss you. Glad you are back.
This is such a tragic subject you write about and certainly, I hope it makes many much more aware.
The number you quote is unbelievable. Truly tragic. How, I wonder can it be stopped, since it is a criminal act done so secretly.
Ralf
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Happy Wednesday, sorry it has taken a minute for me to get back with you. Covid has created a little bit of a different more hectic life that before. I am hoping to get back to my passion soon. Appreciate you took time to read this. These precious beings need our whole earth to wake up and help stop this horror. xoxoxoxoxxo
Comment from Janetsue
The people who engage in this heinous crime have the darkest souls possible. It is heartbreaking to think about so many stolen children and their terrible plight. I'm glad you've brought current attention to this problem, Diana. We must remain vigilant and report anything suspicious immediately. Stay safe and well, my friend. --Janet
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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The people who engage in this heinous crime have the darkest souls possible. It is heartbreaking to think about so many stolen children and their terrible plight. I'm glad you've brought current attention to this problem, Diana. We must remain vigilant and report anything suspicious immediately. Stay safe and well, my friend. --Janet
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Hello, dear friend! sorry it is taking me a bit to respond. Life has changed a lot around here due to Covid, but hopefully I'll be getting back to my passion soon. Appreciate you took time to read about these precious one. You take care of Janet, too for Dian :) xoxoxoxoxox
Comment from Ronni
Hi Diana,
Re these ironic, helpless missing children, staggering numbers,
I enjoin you 100 times over in prayers for this vast massacre and
abuse of children worldwide! Your message is right on....Exposure of
it, all the forms of it, is only way to keep it out in the open, so often
and so long, till it can no longer be ignored or kept down in its
decaadent darkness and despair. More action is needed direly for
intervention by those that have power or influence to do so, but
are blind eyed and cold hearted about this atrocity.
Great to see you back, and understand periodic absence. Do take
care, and thank you for the red flag alert on this unpardonable
tragedy. Prayer may seem too little, but far better than none or
too few. Children lost so horribly ought never be hopeless.
Love, blessings, Ronni
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Hi Diana,
Re these ironic, helpless missing children, staggering numbers,
I enjoin you 100 times over in prayers for this vast massacre and
abuse of children worldwide! Your message is right on....Exposure of
it, all the forms of it, is only way to keep it out in the open, so often
and so long, till it can no longer be ignored or kept down in its
decaadent darkness and despair. More action is needed direly for
intervention by those that have power or influence to do so, but
are blind eyed and cold hearted about this atrocity.
Great to see you back, and understand periodic absence. Do take
care, and thank you for the red flag alert on this unpardonable
tragedy. Prayer may seem too little, but far better than none or
too few. Children lost so horribly ought never be hopeless.
Love, blessings, Ronni
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Hello my dear friend. Sorry I have been absent, but had to take a break until I felt inspired again. So much is happening and happened that I have had to absorb but not write. I?m feeling a little more settled and will try to come here more frequently than I have been. Maybe not as much as before though. I have missed your beautiful words and miss not being able to support your work, but I will try to find my way back to what I love-poetry and my dear friends here. Much Love xxxooo
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Hello dear Diana,
So happy to hear from you dear
friend, you have been dearly
missed. No apologies ever
needed dear, I understand
fully! Have been off and on
here myself, so I know full
well so much in between affects our lives and our poetic aspirations, So glad
you took break as needed for
you; and will be writing again
as you can, when you can, with no pressures or schedules. What works best fore you, is best choice, and
ok. with me.
Thanks for your lovely compliments on my writing and faithful support, it has
always been deeply appreciated and always will
be, as likewise I have missed your writings too, as much!
You have been in my thoughts & prayers all along,
and will continue to be; and
so glad you responded here.
Stay safe, well, and loved,
and indeed loved by your
friend here for blessings of
your friendship and thoughtfulness.
Love, blessings, always!
Ronni
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is clear and concise. Well written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is clear and concise. Well written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from ameen786
Poetry itself is a powerful weapon and I appreciate you using it as a vehicle to demonstrate a sad reality that must be surfaced to kill. Good luck!
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Poetry itself is a powerful weapon and I appreciate you using it as a vehicle to demonstrate a sad reality that must be surfaced to kill. Good luck!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
Comment from June Sargent
Very powerful piece that captures the seriousness of what many turn a blind eye to. It is an issue that needs to be addressed. The danger is real and the children are the most vulnerable. Thank you for highligting it.
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Very powerful piece that captures the seriousness of what many turn a blind eye to. It is an issue that needs to be addressed. The danger is real and the children are the most vulnerable. Thank you for highligting it.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020