Peace
At the end of the day.38 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, how I wish that were possible all the time -- sometimes, yeah, but sometimes things plague the heart and mind and it's easier to read a fiction novel than to face the dreams we know may come... :) A wonderful offering of what we wish we could do - best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Oh, how I wish that were possible all the time -- sometimes, yeah, but sometimes things plague the heart and mind and it's easier to read a fiction novel than to face the dreams we know may come... :) A wonderful offering of what we wish we could do - best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2020
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Ah, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed my shortest poem ever. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs....
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sally, I loved this 15 syllable s poem. It's not only beautifully written but it is also so very well said. Yes, I can identify with it. It's a great entry for the contest. Good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Hi Sally, I loved this 15 syllable s poem. It's not only beautifully written but it is also so very well said. Yes, I can identify with it. It's a great entry for the contest. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind comments. It is so appreciated, dear Ulla. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Boogienights
How do you do it? My troubles and my pain keep me up at night, it's been bad lately. I wish I could let go, and find peace like you. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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How do you do it? My troubles and my pain keep me up at night, it's been bad lately. I wish I could let go, and find peace like you. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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I give my cares to Jesus. Chamomile tea helps, too. It calmed the central nervous system. Brew a cup before bedtime. The music is my nighty night song. :)
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xos
Comment from elchupakabra
So true! I actually have a pretty hard time with this, not always due to negative thoughts but just thoughts in general running through my head. Great work on this piece and good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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So true! I actually have a pretty hard time with this, not always due to negative thoughts but just thoughts in general running through my head. Great work on this piece and good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for the kind review of my poem. Much appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from poetwatch
How do you do that, Sally? I find that what happened during the day is winded up and restarted when I try to sleep. A constant churning of words, flashes of meaningless insights of what I should have done. Then, as I sleep, something wakes me up! I sleep maybe 3 to 4 hours then it's wake-up, go yo sleep, wake-up----etc. I envy you. Good offering for the 15 Syllable Poem contest. :) Take care.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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How do you do that, Sally? I find that what happened during the day is winded up and restarted when I try to sleep. A constant churning of words, flashes of meaningless insights of what I should have done. Then, as I sleep, something wakes me up! I sleep maybe 3 to 4 hours then it's wake-up, go yo sleep, wake-up----etc. I envy you. Good offering for the 15 Syllable Poem contest. :) Take care.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Here's my evening RX: Give everything to the Lord: Woriies, cares, sickness, disasters and disappointing reviews. (Ha ha....) We all have stuff that needs to be handed over to God for only he can change most things. I keep a to-do list which includes what Id like to write for the week. Write it down so your brain will rest. Drink chamomile tea before bedtime. It calms the central nervous system naturally. Valerian root is good tea at bedtime, but check with your doctor on this one especially if you take a sedative. I take one anti-seizure drug for migraines and that's it. Everything else is natural and homeopathic. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and nighty night song. This particular song puts me out.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from Bill Pinder
Sally, I like this simple poem presenting a good message. That's the best way to handle life calmly one day at a time. Thanks for sharing your creativity and good luck in the contest. Bill
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Sally, I like this simple poem presenting a good message. That's the best way to handle life calmly one day at a time. Thanks for sharing your creativity and good luck in the contest. Bill
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you, dear Bill. Sleep and peace is so vital to the day and outlook. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from The Death
It's an excellent poem which shows how letting go of things that upset one would bring peace. This is so easy to relate with. Fine presentation of your work. Good luck!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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It's an excellent poem which shows how letting go of things that upset one would bring peace. This is so easy to relate with. Fine presentation of your work. Good luck!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you, dear Death. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and full presentation. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from Louise Michelle
Lucky you - I can't let go at the end of the day. I'm a very hyper person. The good thing is all that nervous energy enables me to work out every day. I usually work out an hour every morning. Anyway, this is a lovely posting. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Lucky you - I can't let go at the end of the day. I'm a very hyper person. The good thing is all that nervous energy enables me to work out every day. I usually work out an hour every morning. Anyway, this is a lovely posting. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for the excellent review, dear Lou. Much appreciated. Love, Sal XOs......
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect entry for the Fifteen Syllable poem! Good luck on the win!
Words flow perfectly great colors! EXCELLENT poem!
Thank you for sharing;-)
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Perfect entry for the Fifteen Syllable poem! Good luck on the win!
Words flow perfectly great colors! EXCELLENT poem!
Thank you for sharing;-)
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you, dear Melodie. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs......
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Comment from Bichon
Such a beautiful poem. Even though it was short, your feelings were very well expressed. We all need to let go of our worries and have a peaceful sleep.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Such a beautiful poem. Even though it was short, your feelings were very well expressed. We all need to let go of our worries and have a peaceful sleep.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you, dear Bichon. Your kind review is much appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs......
