Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This poem speaks of two beautiful beings, monarchs and medical staff. Both have long journies before they find their homes. You allude to corona virus in the medical part of the poem. It does show faith is worth having and following.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020

Thanks for the review, Joan. I hope you're staying well, too.

reply by dragonpoet on 01-Jul-2020

You're welcme, Aiona. So far so good and staying well.
Joan

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Wow what a comparison, the drive of man to what they feel they need to do, a monarch butterfly as it thrives and moves on as needed. Very well done in rhyme and flow and especially content

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020

Thanks, Barb.

Comment from Ellen Boston

Exceptional

Loved it. The symbolism is beautiful written. This poem makes me think of the wonders of life and want to excel into a better, braver person. Great rhyming as well. Perfectly executed.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020

Thank you, Ellen.