AmaZing Animals
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "AmaZing Animals - M"The A-Z of animals and facts
61 total reviews
Comment from Irene Bratton
This is another great piece! You have the perfect combination of words and images in this one. It's very eye-catching. I notice a couple of things but they're just technical. From my perspective, "south-western" shouldn't be hyphenated but you may have learned differently so scratch that one. The second is in this: "Their biggest threat comes from the eagles, jackals and some snakes." I'm thinking it should be, "Their biggest threats come..." because multiple predators equal multiple threats. That's just my opinion. Again, great work. I foresee my children becoming fans of yours. :)
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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This is another great piece! You have the perfect combination of words and images in this one. It's very eye-catching. I notice a couple of things but they're just technical. From my perspective, "south-western" shouldn't be hyphenated but you may have learned differently so scratch that one. The second is in this: "Their biggest threat comes from the eagles, jackals and some snakes." I'm thinking it should be, "Their biggest threats come..." because multiple predators equal multiple threats. That's just my opinion. Again, great work. I foresee my children becoming fans of yours. :)
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2020
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Hi Charley, thank you for going back and reading this one. And a big thank you for picking out that missing 's' on threats, you are absolutely right and I'm surprised no one else picked up on that, especially me! I love having children reading my work. I've been writing for all age groups, from the very young to adult novels. But, I think my biggest love is for children. My grandchildren are my biggest fans, and also by far my biggest critics! Thank you again, for another lovely review. I'm delighted you enjoyed this one as well. :)) Sandra xx
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Children are so courageous, even the shy ones. They point out so many things to us that adults would be afraid to say. It's a great thing - most of the time. :)
Comment from RGstar
I actually enjoyed the read Sandra, very educational, and nicely presented. The visual side of things are very important for children, and its good to see you have incorporated that in your presentation.
A very well done. He will be proud to have this write for him.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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I actually enjoyed the read Sandra, very educational, and nicely presented. The visual side of things are very important for children, and its good to see you have incorporated that in your presentation.
A very well done. He will be proud to have this write for him.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Hello, RG, how lovely to see you back here! I hope you're keeping safe and well? Thank you so much for reading my letter M. I agree with you, visuals are very important, it helps them remember and understand. I'm doing this with all the letters. I'm delighted you thought it was good. Thank you, my friend. Don't go staying away again! I've missed your beautiful poems, and your voice. :)) Sandra xx
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I came on the author side hoping to read one of your beauties. I will be in support as long as I stay my dear friend...good to see you and family safe. Take care. Best wishes.
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I'm so pleased you're staying, and writing some poetry? Thanks for that nice compliment, too! I'm blushing. lol.
Comment from Cindy Decker
Such a beautiful, resilient little animal. From the photos I see that he is very comely. I'm surprised Meerkats live longer in captivity; I thought they would thrive better in their own surroundings. This is such a lovely presentation, Sandra. I will be returning to read your other works. Have a wonderful day.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Such a beautiful, resilient little animal. From the photos I see that he is very comely. I'm surprised Meerkats live longer in captivity; I thought they would thrive better in their own surroundings. This is such a lovely presentation, Sandra. I will be returning to read your other works. Have a wonderful day.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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I think they live longer in captivity because they don't have the predators to deal with. I doubt the animal parks will sort the scorpions out for them, but then again, who knows! I'd let them get on with it. Thank you so much for reading this one, Cindy, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Bill Pinder
Sandra, thanks for sharing this very interesting writing about an amazing creature with God-given instincts and skills, the meerkat. Keep on writing and sharing with your grandson and other children. Bill
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Sandra, thanks for sharing this very interesting writing about an amazing creature with God-given instincts and skills, the meerkat. Keep on writing and sharing with your grandson and other children. Bill
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Bill. How nice of you, your reviews are always so encouraging, and I really appreciate them. Have a lovely day, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from CPL
Wow! This is really informative and sweet. What a nice present for your grandson! I would love to read this book and I am sure it would be a great ABC book for all to buy! Nicely done.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Wow! This is really informative and sweet. What a nice present for your grandson! I would love to read this book and I am sure it would be a great ABC book for all to buy! Nicely done.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you so very much for this most complimentary review, CPL, and for the lovely six stars! I'm hoping that many will enjoy reading about all these fascinating animals. Have a wonderful day, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from F. William Lester
Very well done. I found this extremely interesting and, yes, educational. I knew very little about meerkats until I read your story. Your grandson is fortunate to have a grandmother as interesting and well read as you.
Thanks for the read.
Good luck. Good writing.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Very well done. I found this extremely interesting and, yes, educational. I knew very little about meerkats until I read your story. Your grandson is fortunate to have a grandmother as interesting and well read as you.
Thanks for the read.
Good luck. Good writing.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you so very much for those six stars, William. and the lovely review. I'm delighted you enjoyed reading about the meerkats, they are so interesting.
Welcome to Fanstory, I'm sure you will love it here. We're a mixed lot, and most are lovely people wanting to improve. I've learnt so much from helpful reviewers. Have fun, and enjoy writing. I look forward to reading your work. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Sandra. I enjoyed reading about the meerkats very much. Interesting content, well presented with images interspersed between sections for clarity. Excellent addition to your book. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Hi Sandra. I enjoyed reading about the meerkats very much. Interesting content, well presented with images interspersed between sections for clarity. Excellent addition to your book. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much, Marilyn. I'm delighted you enjoyed this one. I didn't realise just how interesting they were! Have a lovely day. :)) Sandra xx
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You're welcome. A good addition to your book. Marilyn
Comment from Megan3333
One again I think it's very nice of you to write this book. Each new chapter teaches me new things and I really like that. Meerkats are so cool and they are actually my Grandpas favorite animal.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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One again I think it's very nice of you to write this book. Each new chapter teaches me new things and I really like that. Meerkats are so cool and they are actually my Grandpas favorite animal.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you so very much for another of your lovely reviews, Megan, and for all those beautiful stars. I hope you let your Grandpa have a read, I'd love to know what he would say. I wish mine was still with me. Sending you a hug, my friend. Enjoy the rest of your week! :) Sandra xx
Comment from Gert sherwood
M is for Meerkat
Smiles to you Sandra ( sandramitchell) for another one of your wonderful writing of describing animals from A to Z.
One thing I was amazed was that part of their diet are
spiders, and a few nice scorpions.
Your pictures of the Meerkat are great.
Thank you for sharing your postings.
Gert
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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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M is for Meerkat
Smiles to you Sandra ( sandramitchell) for another one of your wonderful writing of describing animals from A to Z.
One thing I was amazed was that part of their diet are
spiders, and a few nice scorpions.
Your pictures of the Meerkat are great.
Thank you for sharing your postings.
Gert
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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A few nice scorpions, lol, that is one of their most favourite dishes! I don't think I'll try them. Thank you so much for reading my letter M, Gert, and the lovely review. The next one is N, and although some have tried to guess what it is, no one has got it right yet. Hope to see you there. Enjoy the rest of your week, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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You are so welcome Sandra
Gert
Comment from Barbaraj1
I know your grandson will love this book when it is finished. I am finding it
very interesting. I don't think I ever heard of the meerkats. The information
and pictures show that you really do good research.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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I know your grandson will love this book when it is finished. I am finding it
very interesting. I don't think I ever heard of the meerkats. The information
and pictures show that you really do good research.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for another lovely review, Barbara. I hope you liked the meerkats, they do have some cute ways. (and some not so cute!) Have a lovely rest of week, my friend. :)) Sandra xx