Unholy Hunger
A 5-7-5 Zombie contest poem...3 total reviews
Comment from sherrygreywolf
I find it hard to critique these super short pieces and meet the minimum word count, but here goes.
Your words captured the very essence of zombies. Vivid imagery - I could almost smell the beast.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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I find it hard to critique these super short pieces and meet the minimum word count, but here goes.
Your words captured the very essence of zombies. Vivid imagery - I could almost smell the beast.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Awe! I?m I only started dojng some Horror when I joined a year ago. I was so impressed with Dean Kuhn, who has since passed, after he was first one to help me here and showed me a live for it. I haven?t done much. I did thought start the Hellacious Horror Club here in this site in memory. I am truly honored by your comment! Your kind words and stars mean so much! xoxoxo
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Dean was one of my favorite authors here and he will be sorely missed. I loved reading his works, as well as having him as a frequent reader/reviewer of my own. I was sad when I realized I came back too late to reconnect with him. But I think he would be pleased that you set up the club in his memory. Stay safe & healthy, my new friend.
Comment from Gypsymooncat
Eeyeewww, this gives me the creeps! And I guess that's what you were aiming for lol. I watched a movie last night that wasn't to do with zombies, but involved cannibalism, and your graphic entry reminded me of it. As much as I dislike all things zombie, you're the second entry I've reviewed today, and the second I'll wish good luck to in the voting xoxoxo
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Eeyeewww, this gives me the creeps! And I guess that's what you were aiming for lol. I watched a movie last night that wasn't to do with zombies, but involved cannibalism, and your graphic entry reminded me of it. As much as I dislike all things zombie, you're the second entry I've reviewed today, and the second I'll wish good luck to in the voting xoxoxo
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you! I run the horror club, so I couldn?t pass up this contest! Haha!! Appreciate your review! Hope you weekend is enjoyable! xoxo
Comment from Ruth Bradford
You created some really strong zombie images here! It's a great piece but I think my accent is making me trip over some of the syllable count (I pronounce devouring with 4 but I can see 3 as well). Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
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You created some really strong zombie images here! It's a great piece but I think my accent is making me trip over some of the syllable count (I pronounce devouring with 4 but I can see 3 as well). Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
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Thank you for reviewing! I did check the syllable count and it said 3 syllables. :) xo
